freddy121389 Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 So far this is all I have completed, I plan on making a few more cards. I posted the last two previously but included them in here again just in-case you hadn't seen them yet. What do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Don't double post, but the cards are great. Evenly balanced, and i like the pics. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy121389 Posted June 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 sorry i forgot to add in one thing, Kashaku's effect is kind of hard to read so I wanted to just post his effect here. Once per turn (Before the draw phase), while you control another "Six Samurai" monster with a different name, you may choose to search 1 level 4 or lower "Six Samurai" monster from your deck (Besides "The Six Samurai - Kashaku") instead of drawing. Remove it from play and place it face down. During your 2nd standby phase add the removed card to your hand. This monster cannot declare an attack during the turn this effect is used. If this card would be destroyed you can destroy another "Six Samurai" monster you control instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 great 6 sam cards you've made there.XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Although this are great cards! I would have to say to change its name cause it was called six samurai because they are six^_^So adding one is not really essential cause it would be called the 7 samurai! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfallen Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 qwll, if you wanna be tecknical Crowler, there are already nine Six Samuri cars, so whats one more ganna hurt? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tekken Ham Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Yes, but there are 6 actual Samurai, a Shogun, a Grandmaster, a Chancellor, and a Chamberlain, along with a spirit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Umm but the other cards are named "Of The Six Samurai" and the original six samurai were named: "The Six Samurai" which specifically are!"The Six Samurai - Yaichi", "The Six Samurai - Kamon", "The Six Samurai - Yariza", "The Six Samurai - Nisashi", "The Six Samurai - Zanji", and "The Six Samurai - Irou". So im absolutely sure! that there are only Six Samurai Monsters!^_^ not including monsters such as monsters with "Of the Six Samurai" in their name^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 I'm afraid to say that ChronosCrowler is right for a professor of cards knows best when it comes to cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Of The Heart Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Balanced and cool pictures Card 8.5Pics 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfallen Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 ok crowler, you win. there still good cards though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 you made a seventh six samurai? :lol: :lol: but these cards are good, so i rate: 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedRecker Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 Good cards, good effects. Like others have said, there are already six Six Samurai and adding another does really defeat the name, but hey the cards are good so who cares? Only thing I'd pick at is OCG in some places. The Six Samurai - KashakuI would write: During your Draw Phase while you control another "Six Samurai" monster with a different name, instead of drawing, you can search your Deck for 1 level 4 or lower "Six Samurai" monster (except "The Six Samurai - Kashaku") and remove it from play face-down. During your 2nd Standby Phase after activation add the removed card to your hand. If this card would be destroyed you can destroy another "Six Samurai" monster you control instead. Samurai's ContributionI would write: This card can only be equipped to a "Six Samurai" monster. The monster equipped with this card can change it's effect to that of another "Six Samurai" monster you control. If the monster with this card would be destroyed, destroy this card instead. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, destroy the equipped monster. Samurai's RetaliationI would write: Special Summon 2 "Six Samurai" monsters from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position. The battle position of these cards cannot be changed, except by a card effect. Destroy the cards Special Summoned by this effect during the End Phase. Now, this is just my opinion and by no means perfect OCG and sentence structure, there may be other ways or better ways to phrase it. Other than that, excellent, I'll give you a 9/10 if you want a rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 3, 2008 Report Share Posted June 3, 2008 The 1st card's pic could be better. :neutral: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Yes! I also agree! but i still think there should be a name change for this card cause! it is still weird to have a Six Samurai that is number 7 maybe change it to "Of The Six Samurai" like Chamberlanin^_^ BTWLord Wyhe Wrote:I'm afraid to say that ChronosCrowler is right for a professor of cards knows best when it comes to cards. Man Thanks! For Acknowledging my title you are really a friend!(*Sniff*) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 qwll' date=' if you wanna be tecknical Crowler, there are already nine Six Samuri cars, so whats one more ganna hurt?[/quote'] Yes, but they aren't ACTUAL Six Samurai. They're like Chamberlain or Mentor or things like that. Not Six Samurai. Otherwise the cards are pretty good...Rate: Image: 1.4/2Ocg: 1.5/2Interest: .6/2Overall Card: 1.5/10effect: 2/2 So the overall card is... [drum roll please!] 7/10!!!GOOD JOB! You can improve alot...Great potential! Your almost there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy121389 Posted June 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 I changed his name because of the confusion and dispute, i also changed his effect to more along the lines of redrecker's suggestion. Here is his effect, This card is considered a "Six Samurai" monster. During your Draw Phase while you control another "Six Samurai" monster with a different name, instead of drawing, you can search your Deck for 1 level 4 or lower "Six Samurai" monster (except "Kashaku, The Exile of the Six") and remove it from play face-down. During your 2nd Standby Phase after activation add the removed card to your hand. This monster cannot declare an attack during the turn this effect is used. If this card would be destroyed you can destroy another "Six Samurai" monster you control instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChronosCrowler Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 Well thats much! better! now that is a great job!!!CC Hereby gives you your final score!!!!(OC - Official Card Material!)98%!!!Keep up the good work!^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 4, 2008 Report Share Posted June 4, 2008 10/10 Excellent work there mate Change to his name even makes him cooler than the other sixes, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freddy121389 Posted June 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2008 thanks guys, im going to think up some more cards and will post later, I'm planning on making a set for six samurai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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