🎭critiques are welcome🎭 💫🧿Eye-dea for an Xyz “Eyes-Restrict” Illusion monster🧿💫

[But First He Lit It On Fire]

 

_Xyzalted Eyes-Restrict_ (DARK)

Rank 1
Illusion / Xyz /Effect

_“Reilinquished” + 2+ monsters with equal Levels/Ranks/Links (transfer their materials)_
_Cards equipped to cards being attached to this card as material are also attached. Gains ATK/DEF equal to the total ATK/DEF of this card’s attached materials. If this card battles a monster, neither can be destroyed by that battle. Once per turn (Quick Effect): You can Target 1 card on the field; attach that Target to this card (Transfer their materials). If this card would be removed from the field by card effect, you can detach 1 material from this card instead. You can Detach 2 materials from this card (Quick Effect): Add 1 Ritual monster or Ritual Spell to your hand from your Deck or GY._

ATK/0 DEF/0

[LazerSwordKirbo]

The first sentence of the effect is kind of confusing, can you explain what it is supposed to do?

[But First He Lit It On Fire]

“The first second” of the effect?

If you mean the “Cards equipped to cards being attached to this card as material are also attached.” bit, the idea was any cards that are equipped to the monsters this card attaches to itself (either from its Xyz Summon or elsewise, like by this card’s own effect) are ALSO attached to itself as materials.

So say I have a “Relinquished” I control that’s gone and equipped itself with a “Curse of Dragon”, and then I Xyz summon “Xyzalted Eyes-Restrict” with that “Relinquished”… The equipped “Curse of Dragon” would ALSO be attached as material.

[LazerSwordKirbo]

I see. I think a better way of wording that might be "Any cards equipped to the cards used as material for this cards XYZ summon are attached to this card."

It may be better to make it an on summon effect that attaches any cards that were equipped to the XYZ materials used for its summon from the GY.