Oni Beast

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well i guess this is where it goes because of the effect so here

I'm pretty sure you can see the effect but if you need me to post the effect here just post saying so, feel free to rate harshly but if your going to say "bad ocg" say whats wrong with the card okay

[qwertyAAA]

9.9/10

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9.9/10

 

wow I didn't expect a that good of a rating

[Noble Legend]

When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

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When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle' date=' you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

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I gotta tell you I don't think that sounds right maybe I should get some one else's opinion

[Noble Legend]

When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle' date=' you can [b']Special Summon [/b]1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

I gotta tell you I don't think that sounds right maybe I should get some one else's opinion

 

Bolded phrases = correct.

 

I'm just not sure whether you want it Summoned from your hand, Deck or Graveyard, you haven't specified.

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When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle' date=' you can [b']Special Summon [/b]1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

I gotta tell you I don't think that sounds right maybe I should get some one else's opinion

 

Bolded phrases = correct.

 

I'm just not sure whether you want it Summoned from your hand, Deck or Graveyard, you haven't specified.

umm why do i have to special summon it?

[Noble Legend]

When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle' date=' you can [b']Special Summon [/b]1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

I gotta tell you I don't think that sounds right maybe I should get some one else's opinion

 

Bolded phrases = correct.

 

I'm just not sure whether you want it Summoned from your hand, Deck or Graveyard, you haven't specified.

umm why do i have to special summon it?

 

Since it is Summoned from a card effect. If you wish to make it Normal Summon you must state so like this: "..you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position(This is treated as a Normal Summon)."

 

or something similiar to that (not sure whether it is "this" or "This").

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When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle' date=' you can [b']Special Summon [/b]1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

I gotta tell you I don't think that sounds right maybe I should get some one else's opinion

 

Bolded phrases = correct.

 

I'm just not sure whether you want it Summoned from your hand, Deck or Graveyard, you haven't specified.

umm why do i have to special summon it?

 

Since it is Summoned from a card effect. If you wish to make it Normal Summon you must state so like this: "..you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position(This is treated as a Normal Summon)."

 

or something similiar to that (not sure whether it is "this" or "This").

 

ok but when i said summoned I didn't meen from the deck or hand I ment from any where

[Titus]

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much' date=' it was the grammar i was worried about.[/quote']

 

O.o Yeah. It's Opticlops. I used to have a bunch of those annoying things. <_<

 

Anyways, the card is ok. Might want to work on getting out another monster, though.

[Noble Legend]

When this monster is destroyed and sent to the graveyard as a result of battle you may summon one "Oni Tank T-34" to the field in face up defense position.

 

Here is a re-written effect:

 

"When this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle' date=' you can [b']Special Summon [/b]1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position."

 

I'm pretty sure that is correct.

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much, it was the grammar i was worried about.

I gotta tell you I don't think that sounds right maybe I should get some one else's opinion

 

Bolded phrases = correct.

 

I'm just not sure whether you want it Summoned from your hand, Deck or Graveyard, you haven't specified.

umm why do i have to special summon it?

 

Since it is Summoned from a card effect. If you wish to make it Normal Summon you must state so like this: "..you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your Deck or hand to the field in face-up Defense Position(This is treated as a Normal Summon)."

 

or something similiar to that (not sure whether it is "this" or "This").

 

ok but when i said summoned I didn't meen from the deck or hand I ment from any where

 

Alright then.. So you may want to say something like this.. "..you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your hand, Deck or Graveyard to the field in face-up Defense Position.."

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Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much' date=' it was the grammar i was worried about.[/quote']

 

O.o Yeah. It's Opticlops. I used to have a bunch of those annoying things. <_<

 

Anyways, the card is ok. Might want to work on getting out another monster, though.

 

hey i worked hard on the picture :( and i like the picture and it's staying there

[Noble Legend]

Picture is from an actual Yu-Gi-Oh card? Except different background and horns on either side of its head? Meh Idc about picture that much' date=' it was the grammar i was worried about.[/quote']

 

O.o Yeah. It's Opticlops. I used to have a bunch of those annoying things. <_<

 

Anyways, the card is ok. Might want to work on getting out another monster, though.

 

hey i worked hard on the picture :( and i like the picture and it's staying there

 

I don't usually care what pictures are on the cards lol. Your Beast does have an "Oni" looking face, so I guess its all well. Just fix that effect up and you'll be fine.

[Kazal]

It's pretty awesome

8,5/10

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It's pretty awesome

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umm thanks..........

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Doesn't that pic exist on an existing card?

[Titus]

Doesn't that pic exist on an existing card?

 

Yeah' date=' it's Opticlops.

 

hey i worked hard on the picture :( and i like the picture and it's staying there

 

lol I wasn't saying it was bad or anything. I don't care about the pictures on cards because I know they're hard to find good ones. When I said "Might want to work on getting out another monster, though.", I meant in his effect. Like instead of getting out Oni Tank T-34, put another monster that would be better instead. Especially when that's the only monster you can bring out.

[odin557]

mmmm, is the tank any good?

if it is 9/10 if not 7/10. :D

[Shadow of Ake]

Isn't this "Opticlops"?

But it's nice :D

[Parting Shot]

Ok seriously people, lrn2see. It may have been Opticlops, but it's not anymore. He changed the pic.

 

I rather like it, though the effect could be reworded a little bit :P

 

overall - 13.23/13.69 ^_^

[MarbleZone]

"When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Oni Tank T-34" from your hand or Deck in face-up Defense Position."

 

A bit too basic. And it wouldn't have hurt to look for another cyclops picture and change it if you saw fit, as it is I'm not so impressed. Searching DA = good. :P