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Willieh Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 I like the card. There are some OCG problems. I think you should reword the effect like this, "This card can be Special summoned by tributing 1 FIRE type monster on your side of the field." Also you should use IMG codes, I reccommend you using my video tutorial found here:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=47794 Besides these two things, I really like it. It seems like a real card. 8/10- very good for a first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Hello newbie. First of all don't use tags use imageshack. And the card has OCG errors but i've seen worse. Good try, to improve correct your OCG and don't overpower the card. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 It's a cool idea. OCG is off not bad though :DAlso use img tags instead of attachments, some folk aren't kind to peoplewho do. To Use a image tag simply click on the card after you make. Copy the code that appears under the card, paste it into the forum and wala the cardis there :D. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 what are OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Official Card Grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 what are OCG OCG stands for Original Card Grammar, you know, what makes the cards sound so Yugiohey. If you read a Some YuGiOh Cards you would get a better feel on how to word your card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 i have made a new card plz rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 a bit better OCG. Keep it up ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Getting there. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 try rate this from 1 to 10 and 10 ist best thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 the effect isn't amazing but i can see great improvement in your OCG.9/10 for me i never liked dragons but i rate farely :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 what can i do so it get bette Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 The last card you made is good, i could see someone in Real Life using it.If you wanted to improve it you could make a different effect, but the effectyou have for that card is ballanced, simplistic. It's a good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 i've never try made an angel so i try pl rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Nice card. OCG idk could be better, simple clean card, good job :D 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 rate all cards thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Overall: 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Blue Lightning Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 I like the cards. The moon Angel wording is a bit confusing. Id give you an 8/10 Overall. You could try wording her like this: As long as thi card is face-up on the field, gain 800 Life points During each Battle Step. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 yes i'am not so good to names Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 For the angel one, I think you should change what type of monster it is (i.e. dragon, warrior, spellcaster e.t.c.) to fairy. I like it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 new card just madei've have edit this card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zangg Posted June 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 WHAT DO YOU THINK ????????[br]Click here to feed me a Star Fruit![br]Get your own at Flyffables! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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