fallen_13 Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 to over powered, saying the card cannot be destroyed at anytime is ABSURD! your new and i understand, the OCG is pretty bad, but again i understand. If at all possible try and use IMG tags instead of attachments :P seeing as your new 7/10 keep trying. The pic and name are pretty cool :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 12, 2008 Report Share Posted June 12, 2008 Way overpowered, but ill give a 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 ok ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fero Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 mmm.. a 7/10 keep trying do not discourage Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 ok in terms of it being overpowered and having a wack effect how is this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 It's ATK/DEF are fine now (make it 2 levels higher though). BUt it's effect is still to powerful. Maybe limit it a bit. Since it's a corrupted angel, maybe make the effect something along the lines of "This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when it battles a Fairy type monster. Negate the effect of a Fairy type Monster Card that targets this 1 card." just a suggestion. I really do like your idea, just refine it a bit more. 7/10 you're getting there :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 ok lol ty i do like ur idea though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 to over powered' date=' saying the card cannot be destroyed at anytime is ABSURD! your new and i understand, the OCG is pretty bad, but again i understand. If at all possible try and use IMG tags instead of attachments :P seeing as your new 7/10 keep trying. The pic and name are pretty cool :D[/quote'] i agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 ok yet another trywell mabey he should be able to be destroyed by battle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Getting warmer, you accidently typed a dash in the name, minor ocg issues but i mess up all the time on that so no worries. Make it 2 levels higher, 2 tributes is fair for it's strength. The cannot be destroyed effect still seems a bit powerful for its strength, maybe add a LP cost or discard cost to activate that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 that would be nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Hmm, it seems better then before, still some issues. Take the advice of tycho.OCG is still pretty off but your getting there :P All your hard work will pay off :D Keep trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 I also though you guys might like a laugh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazenz Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 getting better than the first so keep working at it 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Fix the first cards name. It should be Fallen Angel, not Fallen Angel- not big deal.2nd card......Someone was bored O.o i don't like it at all. 1st card. 7/102nd card. 2/10 Just me. Your getting there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 the hyphen is there so it doesnt overwrite the original- i want to see how it changed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 other than ocg, it's still a bit too powerful, choose to make it untargetable by one of those 3 or make a cost for that. I recall making a card that can become unaffected by a card that designates it, but you have to discard a card each time to activate that. otherwise , your cards come a long way in a short time, your getting very good very fast. keep it up! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fallen_13 Posted June 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 lol ty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Senbanzakura Posted June 13, 2008 Report Share Posted June 13, 2008 Better. No ones perfect but i can really see your improvement :D8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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