correct ocg

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

what is the write ocg for this

 

As long as this card is face up on your side of the field once per turn during your main phase you may give up 1000 life points to special summon one level 4 or lower monster from your opponets or your graveyard.if it is level 5-8 you must pay 2000 life points.if it is level 9-12 you must pay 3000 life points.

[Atomix]

As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field once per turn during your Main Phase you may give up 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your opponents or your Graveyard. If it is level 5-8 you must pay 2000 Life Points. If it is level 9-12 you must pay 3000 life points.

 

I tryed

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

are you preaty sure its correct

[MasterOfMagicians]

Since you can only activate card effects when they are face up on the field, remove that line.

 

Once per turn, during your main phase, you may activate one of the following effects:

* Pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from either players graveyard.

* Pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 level 5, 6, 7 or 8 monster from either players gravyard.

* Pay 3000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 level 9, 10, 11, or 12 monster from either players graveyard.

 

By the way, just a side note. 3000 lifepoints to bring out a level 12? Are you kidding me? Waaaaay too easy to bring out a level 12 from the graveyard by paying 3000. Do you know the kind of damage you can do with that? Instant bannage.

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

ok how about level 9-10 3000

and level 11-12 5000

 

edit-whats the write ocg for this

 

all the things you just said +regadless if the effect says it cant be special summond

[MasterOfMagicians]

...better, but still.

What level is the monster that has this effect?

and what are the requirements to bring that monster out?

Maybe lessen the effect from once per turn down to once every three turns.

or prevent that monster from attacking the turn it is special summoned.

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

level 5

you must sacrifise 3 Dark type monsters

no

yes

[MasterOfMagicians]

Personally I'd do something along these lines.

 

This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 Dark Attribute monsters with 2000 ATK or more from your side of the field. Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects:

1) Pay 1000 life points to special summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from either players graveyard to your side of the field.

2) Pay 2000 life points to special summon 1 level 5 or 6 monster from either players graveyard to your side of the field.

3) Pay 3000 life points to special summon 1 level 7 or 8 normal monster from either players graveyard to your side of the field.

4) Pay 5000 life points to special summon 1 level 9, 10, 11, or 12 monster from either players graveyard to your side of the field.

A monster Special Summoned with this effect cannot attack the turn it is Special Summoned. Monsters with levels higher than 6 are destroyed at the end phase of your opponent's next turn.

[Wi Fi Master Jordan]

i like every thing exept this

 

Monsters with levels higher than 6 are destroyed at the end phase of your opponent's next turn.

[「tea.leaf」]

[spoiler=Correct OCG]Once per turn, during Main Phase, you can select 1 monster in either Graveyard and Special Summon it to your side of the field. The target monster cannot attack during the turn it is Special Summoned. Activate one of the following effects based on the target monster's Level:

• 1 - 4: Pay 1000 Life Points.

• 5 - 6: Pay 2000 Life Points, target monster is destroyed in your opponent's End Phase.

• 7 - 8: Pay 3000 Life Points, target monster is destroyed in your opponent's End Phase.

• 9 - 12: Pay 5000 Life Points, target monster is destroyed in your opponent's End Phase.