Exyst Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 So, tell me what you think? PM me bio's and ill accept them.All new chapters will be added to first post, in spoilers. [spoiler=Character Bio's]My character Name:Marco Flame Deck: Raging Destruction[spoiler=The Deck. Combos included]Monsters3X Ultimate Baseball Kid1X Solar Flare Dragon1X Blazing Inpachi2X Inferno1X Molten Zombie1X Blazing Hiita1X Hiita the Fire Charmer1X Blast Magician1X Launcher Spider1X Gaia Soul The combustable collective1X Thestalos The Firestorm Monarch2X Great Angus1X Woodborg Inpachi1X Little Chimera3X UFO turtle1X Fox fire1X Raging Flame Sprite1X Lava Golem (< in limited =D)1X Infernal Flame Emperor Spells1X Heavy Storm1X Chain Strike1X The Reliable Guardian2X Premature Burial1X Change of Heart2X Creature Swap1X Lightning Vortex1X MST1X Molten Destruction1X Ookazi1X Fairy Meteor Crush1X Mage power1X Rush Recklessly1X Tribute to the doomed1X Dark Room of Nightmare Traps1X Backfire3X Dust Tornado1X Spiritual Fire Art - Kurenai1X Jar of Greed1X Trap Hole1X Chthonian Blast1X Divine Wrath1X DNA transplant1X Zero Gravity COMBOS! DNA transplant to FIRE. Use Hiita Charmer's effect/Use Blazing Hiita's effect when i COH a monster. Gaia Soul, Main Phase 2, B4 it is destroyed, Spiritual Fire art it. Special Summon a Lava Golem to opponents field, then Flip a Hiita the fire charmer. Take Lava golem. He also has a Darkblaze deck, ill post that too. Age: 12 Bio: He will do anything to Help others. Dedicated Dueller. Appearance: Always wear Red clothes. red hair and gloves too. [spoiler=Episode 1]Marco Woke up, staring at his alarm. 8:12:51 AMMarco: Well another day, another duel.He got out of bed and got dressed. It was a sunny, but a little cloudy none-the-less, day. Walking down the street, towards the nearest Duel Shop, he bumped into an old friend, Duria. She had long, blonde hair. She was wearing a sunburst yellow dress with matching shoes.Duria: What are you up to now Marco, you are up to something, right?Marco had a grin on his faceMarco: Nothing.......Duria: Are you sure.......Duria Peered into Marco's Eyes.Duria: This has something to do with Ravvy, doesn't it.Ravvy: Someone called? What do you want?Duria: I think Marco wants to duel you-Marco: Nothing. I'm heading to the Plaza, want to come?Ravvy: Sure, I guess.Duria: I'm in, I guess Down at the plaza....... Ravvy: what are we doing this early here anyway?Marco: It's a surprise. i hope you brought your deck.Ravvy: Sure did. Never leave without itDuria: I'm still in need of oneMarco: Duria, you can watch and learn, I hope you don't mind. In the Shop..... Ravvy: WHOA! dude, its a tournamentMarco Activated his duel disk with a big grin on his face.Marco: I hope you want to duel!Ravvy: Sure! Get Your Game on!Marco: Dude, that is lame.......Ravvy: Meh, thats just like me.DUEL! Marco: First, I draw, then I throw a monster in face down defense position, with 2 face-down cards. Your move!Ravvy: Ok! My go, I draw then activate Ancient Rules! This, as you know, lets me Special Summon a level 5 or higher normal monster from my hand. And I choose Blue-Eyes White Dragon! Go, Attack his face down!Marco: Grr, you destroyed UFO turtle, now I Special Summon my Solar Flare Dragon.Ravvy: Lucky Move. Your move.Marco: No face-downs? your up to something.....Right, Draw, I activate Tribute to the Doomed! By discarding my Great Angus, I can destroy your Blue-Eyes! Then I remove it from play my UFO turtle and Solar Flare Dragon to Special Summon 2 Inferno's! Now, All attack directly!Ravvy LP= 3500Marco LP= 8000Marco: Your Move. You lose 500 life points Due to solar Flare's effectRavvy LP= 3000Marco LP= 8000Ravvy: Ok, I draw, and activate the effect of my Far Out Light Keeper (Light/0ATK/0DEF/Lore: You can discard this card and pay 1000 life points to destroy all monsters on the field that have been special Summoned. When you activate this effect, you cannot Summon this turn.) By discarding him and paying 1000 Life points, I destroy your field, because all monsters have been Special Summoned!Ravvy LP= 2000Marco LP= 8000Marco: But then, you cant Summon.Ravvy: That is why I lay 3 Face downs. Your Move.Marco: Cool, right. I Summon Gaia Soul the combustible collective. I attack you directly! You loseRavvy: No, I activate my WabokuMarco: I counter, activate Spiritual Fire Art - Kurenai. By tributing my Gaia Soul, you lose Life points equal to iths attack. I count 2000. You LoseRavvy: Grr, How dare you. Ah well, i learnt lotsDuria: So have I.Ravvy and Marco: Oh, we forgot about you.Duria: ¬.¬, Boys. To be continued! [spoiler=Episode 2]It was still sunny in the Plaza of Reidon City.Duria: Can you teach me to duel?Marco: No.Duria: Please?Marco: No...Duria: PLEASE?!?Marco: yesDuria: ReallyMarco: No, I'm busy discussing strategies with Ravvy. Geez. ¬.¬ Girls.Duria: i did that joke, that ¬.¬ thing last episode, ImmbassylMarco: Episode? you mean?Suddenly, they heared a voice.???: I control your move, watch.??? makes Duria Leap into the fountainMarco: Cool, how can I do that?Duria, meanwhile is shreiking like HELL!???: Just step into the light.Duria: Don't Marco!Marco: Why not?Duria: You make yourself a modern JadenMarco: Eww, Jaden, Geez. ¬.¬Duria: yea, and you did it again, dont make me come hit you!Marco (with evil plan): Oh, I'm falling! into the light.....AAAAH!Duria and a sudden appeared Ravvy: NO! In the ??? of ??? in ??? of ??? In the country of ??? In a ??? Universe. ???: Marco, glad to see youMarco: No time, I want that power, and where are you???: Im playing Tricks on you.Marco: Oh,???: Imagine a lever and Grab for it.Marco Tries hard. A lever appearsMarco: Ok, Marco grabs the lever and ??? appears.???: Grab my handMarco: Ok..............Marco grabs ???'s hand??? Grips tightlyMarco: Whoa....???: FEEL THE POWER COARSING THROUGH YOUR VEINS!Marco: I do!Marco's deck Shined a bit, then turned shadow'yMarco: Huh,???: you now have, the power of DarkBlaze. Whenever you feel angry Call me and i infuse it into your original Fire deck. Making you unstoppable.Marco: No catch????: NoMarco: You sure????: yesMarco: Ok the, how do i go???: Duel me first.Marco: Ok! I never back down.??? & Marco: DUEL! Marco: OK! my move. "Marco stared at his cards and found out they were his original cards, only different names and better effects" I draw and Summon Darkblaze Flare Dragon in Attack mode. I play 2 face downs then i end my move. And you lose 500 life points of damage, + 300 per dakblaze monster on the field, i count 1. so that's 800 points of damage ??? LP: 3200Marcos LP: 4000 ???: I draw, and activate the spell Hammer shot!Marco: No, I activate Zero Gravity, so your hammer shot is useless.???: Heh, Now i summon Darkblaze Sprite In attack mode. Now, Direct ATTACK! ???: LP: 3200Marco LP: 3900 ???: and now his attack is increased by 1000, + 100 for every Darkblaze monster in my hand. I count 3, so that makes him 1400 ATK I end my move Marco: Draw, Then I switch my Darkblaze Flare Dragon to attack, the I summon another Darkblaze Flare Dragon. Now you cannot attack either of them. Then i activate Graceful Charity, I draw 3 then discard 2. I tehn remove from play my Darkblaze Emporer to Special Summon DarkBlaze Inferno in attack mode, then i activate my 2 face downs, my 2 rising energy's giving 3000ATK to my Darkblaze Inferno. Now, Destroy his SPRITE! AND HIS LIFE POINTS! ??? LP: 600Marco LP: 3900 Marco: this is over.???: is it?Marco: yes, because If I destroy a monster, using Inferno's effect, you lose 1500 ATK points. I WIN! ???: Good, it worked, you are now the Great Warrior Flare Marco, to recognize you, i give you this!??? placed his hand over Marco's head, bringing him crashing down to the floor.???: Valuable Energy.........Tasty. To be continued, AGAIN! [spoiler=Episode 3 (Part 1)]Duria: Man, or girl even, Marco has been gon a long time. Maybe i shud find him. What was that thing's name? ??? I believe, 1 sec..... Duria takes out laptop and logs on YCM and checks the fanficDuria: =o, yea, his name is ???Duria stands and shouts ???!???: What now, geez I never have rest ¬.¬Duria: Im sick of people copying my ¬.¬, it annoys me. Oh yea, where is Marco mr. ??? ?Duria hears a scream\Duria: Was that Marco????: No, uhh, umm it was anothe pirsoner named markDuria: More like Marco! let me see him???: if you want!??? teleports Duria UpRavvy: huh, Duria, wher are you? Mean while in ???'s ???Duria: Marco............ why is he sleeping????: Can you duel?Duria: No, not really.....???: then you must try. The loser gets eliminated to a deep, impeneterable sleep.Duria: Uhh, ok, i guess. I dont have a deck???: Use marco's.....Duria: =S okDuria takes marco's deck.Duria and ???: Duel Duria: irst i draw and summon, uhh, Darkblaze Flare dragon in ATK mode. I throw a face down and end my turn???: see, you can play. oh and to let you know, Marco is in the deep sleep, forever!Duria's confidence was shaken... To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 pretty good. but when ravvy loses 500 points because of solar flare dragons effect, aren't you meant to say solar flare dragon instead of solar flare? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Awesome, good luck with the rest of the duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted June 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 pretty good. but when ravvy loses 500 points because of solar flare dragons effect' date=' aren't you meant to say solar flare dragon instead of solar flare?[/quote'] Its shot for Solar flare dragon. Soz for inconvinience Episode 2 Posted. And for 2 reps, ill tell you what all the ??? mean in the divider after |Mraco steps into the light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Nice Chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted June 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 cool,ill work on 3 now, then i mite stop and relax, IDK Meh, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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