123tao Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Once you improve on the quality of the picture, your capitalization, and your punctuation, your card will be about perfect! Keep up the great work! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Cool card, it fuses 2 really cool monsters. The pics a bit blurry but otherwise it's perfect. theres also ocg but I don't really downrate cards very much for that. 8/10 keep it up :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Not bad, but if u want a card look VERY real they dont say "gains one thousand attack and defense points" the say "gains 1000 ATK and DEF" u dont need to work out in this advice but it would really make it more real! otherwise this card is cool nice try! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tefached Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 you shouldnt have posted this thread twice..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Blurry pic, and the effect is a bit overpowering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Same as above ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexeaus Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 op, blurry pic7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkTunerMiseryKing Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 awesome card mate, but..... see if you can improve the quality of the pic, but otherwisw great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Pick a differnt Pic.The effect is ok but because it's a divine beast you don't have to state "Not Including This Card..." or whatever cuz it's not a dragon. and it has some pretty hard fusion matirials to come up with im not even sure it would be worth the trouble. 2 5000ATKer's thats 10000 to me i would just leave em.It's ok you'll get better ^^ 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaviper Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 great job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonMasterAman Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 Nice job! The OCG and pic can be better though. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 The pic is distorted, a lot. But I see you're new so you'll need time to adapt to the site. We're all friendly here, don't worry. 7.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blud Posted June 14, 2008 Report Share Posted June 14, 2008 OCG: Not bad. Still. - 7/10 Image: Blurry. Doesn't really look like the combination of those 2 monsters. - 6/10 Name: Doesn't sound to powerful, and it does not go with the image. - 4/10 Balance: WAY OVERPOWERED!!! Just so you know it is not so hard bringing out those 2 monsters. - 5/10 OVERALL: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BladeXDestiny Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Not bad for a first card.But the picture is kinda blurry and the effect is kinda overpowering.Also you shouldnt say "This card cannot be Special Summoned except for Fusion Summoned" just say something like " You can only conduct a Fusion Summon through the material's listed above. Just reduce the ATK a bit and u should be ok7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 nice but a overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 glasstin10 Once you improve on the quality of the picture, your capitalization, and your punctuation, your card will be about perfect! Keep up the great work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zoloa37 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Once you improve on the quality of the picture' date=' your capitalization, and your punctuation, your card will be about perfect! Keep up the great work![/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Pretty good card. A tad overpowering, and the effect is a bit much. Seeing as its your first card. 7.9/10 Keep trying and you will get better :D ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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