Two cool cards.

[Jordan301]

Please rate

 

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[Amethyst Phoenix]

Not bad, 6/10.

[lalolalo]

You should make your monster a level 5, you can abuse it's effect with other cards.

 

Have some OCG errors, like Fiend-Type, Life Points, Spell, Trap.

 

You should take the third one out, or you are gonna have -reps.

[Jordan301]

Lol happy i changed it :P

[Uchiha]

9/10

Image 1 Overused

Nice Effect

little OP

Images Not good Quality

A for effort

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Pics could be better.

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

The Demon Hunter: Pic's a little blurrry. Change effect to "Fiend-Type monsters this card destroys by battle are removed from play instead of going to the Graveyard. Each time this card destroys a Fiend-Type monster by battle, this card gains 300 ATK."

 

Last Breath: Pic's blurry here too. Change effect to "When a monster you control is destroyed, pay Life Points equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster to destroy all Spell and Trap Cards your opponent controls." Remember, on your side of the field=you control. On your opponent's side of the field=your opponent controls. This is new OCG, remmber it.

 

Hope that helps, feel free to copy and paste the re-written effects on to your cards, then you'll have proper OCG. ^_^