Senbanzakura Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Hey Peoples Of YCM I finished my first set HORRAY! But, even though i went over them, looking and changing, I'm sure most of them still have OCG problems and what not. I would like, if at all possible, you to tell me which cards are bad and need work :D I love getting feedback, if someone has helping critisizm thats fine, i need all the help i can get, I my self am very new to the game of YuGiOh....but i learn fast @__@ At least i hope i do So here are all 40 cards, hope they are not toooo bad :D And remember, they aren't completely done, if they were i would post them in the Finished set section :^PIn order form A/Z :P Thanks for looking hope you sorta like them, and hope they are sorta ok ^__^ YCM For The WORLD!! >=D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PacmanTTTTY Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 i reallly dont know what to say. something good or bad, im not good yet soryr.tey look cool bery good. nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Well, i am new here and have looked in every forum... and nothing have been so good as these ones... i would like to give you a 20/10 but the highest is 10/10 but i really love that cards.GREAT WORK! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Well' date=' i am new here and have looked in every forum... and nothing have been so good as these ones... i would like to give you a 20/10 but the highest is 10/10 but i really love that cards.GREAT WORK! :D[/quote'] Thank you very much :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxar Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Your welcome m8 ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 thease are average sorry to burst your bubble man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 thease are average sorry to burst your bubble man You didn't burst my bubble :D I know they aren't amazing, my goal with this set was to get better at OCG. That's all, so how was the card grammar, what areas do you think i need to improve on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardMaster97 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Cool Cards, I would give you 9.5/10 because the cards were good and I think you completed your goal of making a good OCG :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 cards are good..!!you do need do change some things in the ocg department lol..!!you really just need to focus because you make the mistake in some cards and not in others uno you have Graveyard capitilised in some then u dont in others also the same with Special/Normal Summons you dnt have them capitilised in some otherwise it seems grand apart from few words here and there you really only need some small work on your capitilisation other than that these are good i no how much effort goes in2 makin a set so well done keep up the good work...!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Really good for your 1st set. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Over all 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate-jake Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 I just want to say, I was looking thru the forum, just peeking, and i stumbled across this, just thought i might give my two cents. After a quick breeze through, i would have to say, "Cotton Faerie" is broken. As well as the Faerie-A/B/C. First of all, Cotton, What it can summon is almost limitless, and with the Faeries? I can see about a Dozen Unlimited combo's with stuff being sent to the graveyard, and being special summoned back into play. meaning Either Draw your entire deck, Gain Infinite life, or something along those lines. And after some reading i found that Faerie captor is one of the ways you can do a unlimited combo. These cards would be either banned or restricted straight away, as they are far to powerful.Niru Traitor to the Trade, Luna Bargin, Fallen From Grace, Dark side of the queen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Excellent, I'm a big fan of your work. 9.8/10..2 taken off for various grammar etc but nevermind that. These cards are simply fabulous! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cameronsdog Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 wow i want this deck and it "shall" be mine even if i have to hold konami at gunpoint no just kiddin 10/10 thats just my opoinoun the fact that u took the time to make an entire strategic deck is just cool my attention span isnt that long my dog says it should be 9.5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JPstaring07 Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 ther asom cards but they dont remind me of actul yu gi oh cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Really nice set, cool and inspired cards, I like them, they're more than average to me, great job, 8.5/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc Necrophades Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 This is how I rate things:1/10 Go and play with dolls!2/10 Boooooooooooooooo!3/10 Stop doing what your doing!4/10 Okay5/10 Better6/10 Getting there.7/10 Very Nice8/10 Awesome9/10 Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!10/10 You should be a Yu-gi-oh card manager, total pownage!You scored: 10/10 Keep doing what your doing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PacmanTTTTY Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 i thnk card you make are good. ery cool :D10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahumut Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 the name dogma is already taken dh dogma should change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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