Careless Whisper Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Yet another skit from the Great War RP...This time truly ending Meti's and Ino's lives. Please comment and rate please. Also...I will include the first part so you can have an understanding on what is going on....This thread is just for comments..and critizism._________________________________________________________ The taunting Meti was receaving was a mere consious to him now. Dispite the fact that his body was dead, he still wanted to Spiritually destroy Zero for what he has done. "LIES!!!" He screamed, as he his first attempt at dive bombing Zero, his hands now showering with dark electricity. He didn't care what happened next, all he thought of, was the fact that his Spirit will die with Ino's no matter what happened. "I WILL MAKE SURE YOU ARE GIVEN EXACTLY WHAT YOU DISERVE!!!" He screamed as he continued to dive bomb. "JUDGEMENT TECHNICK, SEAR OF GOD GRADE 3!!!" He screamed once more, and his entire body now engulfed itself with the screaming lightning of gold and purple. This is for you, Ino. he thought to himself as if she was there in his mind, as he himself dived even faster toward Zero, his last act as a Spirit, his last act of existance, will be to avenge his family, his home, his love. "DIE!!!" He finalized at he collided with Zero, impaling both himself and his target into the scenery of the top of Mount Olympus. Shaking the entire whole of the heavens, and with a bright flash of golden light, bright enough to be seen from the Stars themselves, erupted from the collision, sending a shockwave like none other, that tore buildings on the earth apart, the world was now engulfed with dust and dubree as the Mount Olympus itself collapsed upon itself, falling down to earth. As the dust and cloudings cleared, a crator revealed itself where the great mountain stood, with only one man in the middle of the rubble made of rock and stone. Sunlight finally pettruded through the darkness the clouds had overcasted upon the world. It shined down upon the one man, who was laying on his back, bloodstained, and burnt. There was no Zero anymore, his body dissinigrated from the act of pure love that Meti had casted upon himself. Meti, who was now weak, lay in the middle, but now, not alone. Laying on top of him, teary eyed and weeping while burying her herself in meti's arms, was The Spirit of Ino-Koa. Not flesh, but a mere angel now, what Meti had become, to lay there, in his arms, to let her spirit die with his spirit, and live beyond the realm of life together and forever, as two lovers to the end of existance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 --Bump... -Meti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Davok Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Great as always. That post kind of marked the end of the First Season of The Great War. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Great as always. That post kind of marked the end of the First Season of The Great War. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davok Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Great as always. That post kind of marked the end of the First Season of The Great War. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I know...I had too much fun with the ending though....But I feel like I did a good job...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I know...I had too much fun with the ending though....But I feel like I did a good job...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 I know...I had too much fun with the ending though....But I feel like I did a good job...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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