cameronsdog Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 i belaive it looks preaty good please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pirate-jake Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Changes its wording to ""Discard 1 card from your hand, This monster can attack twice during the battle phase of this turn." and lower its attack to 1500 or 1400, and you have your self a non-broken card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 15, 2008 Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 OP a bit. Make his stars 5 and increase attack by 300 or so or decrease attack by 100. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 the 1st pic is cool. The second one could be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 OCG is off some, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Blud Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 OCG: You should get into the habit of capitalization. Plus it is not that good. Work on it. - 5/10 Image: First card has a cool image, but the second is, yet again, white backgrounded and bland. It needs color. - 7/10 Name: Pretty good, but again, work on capitalization. - 8/10 Balance: Not bad. I like the combo. - 9/10 OVERALL: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 Need to improve and be more creative cuz I'm off on these ones *_* x_x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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