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Willieh

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the OCG is pretty bad, but not horrible.. and I don't know how many people I have had to tell: "YOU DO NOT HAVE A LIMITED EDITION CARD!!" Limited Edition cards need a gold sticker, and since there's no gold sticker there's no limited edition... so get rid of that.

 

You should capitalize "Sea Serpent" instead of "sea serpent" for the cardtype.

 

I need to see "Call of the Demon" before I rate the card.

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the OCG is pretty bad' date=' but not horrible.. and I don't know how many people I have had to tell: "YOU DO NOT HAVE A LIMITED EDITION CARD!!" Limited Edition cards need a gold sticker, and since there's no gold sticker there's no limited edition... so get rid of that.

 

You should capitalize "Sea Serpent" instead of "sea serpent" for the cardtype.

 

I need to see "Call of the Demon" before I rate the card.

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Honestly this was like one of the first cards I made. I really made it to demonstrate the other holo effect. And as for the whole "Limited Edition" thing, I was trying to just get it over with so I typed that in.

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Ahhh.. I was looking at the wrong card (your BEWD-related card) when I 'pm'-ed you..

 

Good job with the gold sticker -- actually upholding your circulation text (Mage: the reason its not good to make a card with "Limited Edition" circulation as a silver sticker, is because it's not realistic. And if a card isn't realistic, then it doesn't exactly belong in the realistic forums, now does it?)

 

Capitalization is needed, and your secondary effect OCG is off as well.

"Summoned" has its 'S' capitalized, just as "Special" and "Set" (got something against the letter 's'? rofl). The secondary effect of the card should be written as "The Original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the ATK and DEF of the last "Demonic" monster sent to your Graveyard (respectively)."

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Ahhh.. I was looking at the wrong card (your BEWD-related card) when I 'pm'-ed you..

 

Good job with the gold sticker -- actually upholding your circulation text (Mage: the reason its not good to make a card with "Limited Edition" circulation as a silver sticker, is because it's not realistic. And if a card isn't realistic, then it doesn't exactly belong in the realistic forums, now does it?)

 

Capitalization is needed, and your secondary effect OCG is off as well.

"Summoned" has its 'S' capitalized, just as "Special" and "Set" (got something against the letter 's'? rofl). The secondary effect of the card should be written as "The Original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the ATK and DEF of the last "Demonic" monster sent to your Graveyard (respectively)."

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Ahhh.. I was looking at the wrong card (your BEWD-related card) when I 'pm'-ed you..

 

Good job with the gold sticker -- actually upholding your circulation text (Mage: the reason its not good to make a card with "Limited Edition" circulation as a silver sticker, is because it's not realistic. And if a card isn't realistic, then it doesn't exactly belong in the realistic forums, now does it?)

 

Capitalization is needed, and your secondary effect OCG is off as well.

"Summoned" has its 'S' capitalized, just as "Special" and "Set" (got something against the letter 's'? rofl). The secondary effect of the card should be written as "The Original ATK and DEF of this card is equal to the ATK and DEF of the last "Demonic" monster sent to your Graveyard (respectively)."

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