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From the Dark comes the Light 4/23.5


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First off, 1st Edition cards have gold stickers. Your cards don't have gold stickers, therefore they are not first efition... a 5-star cardmaker should already be familiar with that aspect of Duel Monster cards...

 

"Fallen Power" shouldn't be a counter trap card ("Rope of Life" isn't and neither is "Call of the Haunted". The card should be Spell Speed 2, not 3)

 

I'm not too familar with LIGHT decks (LOTD just came out, so I haven't seem much going on..), but I'm sure that "Master of the Sky" would be limited for his excellent battle invulnerability effect, paired with the ATK & DEF gain opportunities...

"Angel's Wings" is nice, but you need to say that damage calculation is applied normally, so that the card isn't like a reusable "Waboku".

 

"Skarr" needs to be level 5 and a limited card if he's going to have 3 attributes and a powerful field control ability...

 

The OCG on all of the cards is off too, but they're at least readable... good job!

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First off' date=' 1st Edition cards have gold stickers. Your cards don't have gold stickers, therefore they are not first efition... a 5-star cardmaker should already be familiar with that aspect of Duel Monster cards...

 

"Fallen Power" shouldn't be a counter trap card ("Rope of Life" isn't and neither is "Call of the Haunted". The card should be Spell Speed 2, not 3)

 

I'm not too familar with LIGHT decks (LOTD just came out, so I haven't seem much going on..), but I'm sure that "Master of the Sky" would be limited for his excellent battle invulnerability effect, paired with the ATK & DEF gain opportunities...

"Angel's Wings" is nice, but you need to say that damage calculation is applied normally, so that the card isn't like a reusable "Waboku".

 

"Skarr" needs to be level 5 and a limited card if he's going to have 3 attributes and a powerful field control ability...

 

The OCG on all of the cards is off too, but they're at least readable... good job!

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Thanks for your advice. I'm sure you know that the cardmaker does not change the "sticker" color and I'm not going out of my way for a set for the sole purpose of getting rid of leftover cards.

 

In Angel's Wings I would say that damage calculation is applied normally but the way I wrote it was that the monster does not take battle damage this turn.

 

Skarr I understand and will change immediatly

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