blaze. Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Ok, I fixed these, see if they are any better. The last one's effect is complicated so lemme explain. It's attack is equal to all the ATK and DEF of all the monsters on the field when it is summoned. example: If all the ATK equal 2500 and the DEF is 2500 then it is 5000. That is divided by 2 so the card's ATK and DEF is 2500/2500. I know, complicated. Here goes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 First of all, you should use IMG codes rather than attachments. You should watch my video found here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=47794 I think that the ritual vessel card could use a different pic, but overall, I LOVE the pictures. Some of the names are a little long, but no one ever said you couldnt make the names long. A lot of OCG errors, but I can still understand the effect. I rate them an 8/10, I look forward to seeing you progress even more :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 6/10. OCG errors, I find them OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blaze. Posted June 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Thank you very much. I hope to progess a lot so my cards are more of a pleasure to look at. Thx again! btw sorry for the ritual items card. The first name of "Kasaitori" was "Phoenix of Egypt". Kind of lame right? Ill fix that asap. thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxys Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 The first one, the fire bird phoenix thing. The effect is wacko, why have two or three? Make a decision, and when it destroys all monsters on the field except it, why make an effect that says it will gain atk points from a fire monster on the field when after you summon it you dont have any monsters? @_@;; 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Not bad for your first cards, you do have errors, but that will get better with time. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ardie Milwrick Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 Nice cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted June 17, 2008 Report Share Posted June 17, 2008 The cards are pretty terribly overpowered... the first wipes the entire field (aside from itself) like Daedalus with easy conditions, while the ritual cards have bad Ritual text, and the mosnter is overpowered. Your Fusion is able to be created with substitute monsters, and is incredibly overpowered... None of these cards really deserve compliments. Unorigninality (Phoenix cards have been made before, believe it or not) and overpoweredness (such incredible aggro and field control powers!!!) are your main problems, keeping this card from being TCG-worthy. You should cool down; try to make some 4-stars [and below] and some less-intense Spell Cards... start with the cards that are easy to balance before runnning full throttle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 I agree with Apocolypse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahumut Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 way op the last card will automatically have 12000 atk not including the monsters on your opponents monsters side of the field. and for a level 4 monster it will have max 2500 atk most likely and your card will have 4000 not including any other monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blaze. Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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