Code Y.C.M Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 [align=center]"CYBER NEGA DRAGON"Hello everyone, it's me.This is my brand new Card that i made, not long agoI wanted to share it with other member's so they can rate & comment my work. Lore:This monster can only be Selected as a monster to be Summoned while you have a "Cyber Dragon" equipped with "Negative Cyber" on your side of the field. Send that monster to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card. While this card is under your control, it's name is treated as "Cyber Nega Dragon". Once per turn, Select 3 monsters, the Selected monsters cannot choose any monster's on your side's of the field as a Attack Target, until this card is removed from the field. Please Rate & Comment DisclaimerThis image is not made by me, i found it on DeviantartArtist: "TB-Samurai" on DeviantartI will post the other Card needed for this Summon on this Thread"SOUL ARMOR FIEND, DENZARE"Lore:This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Selecting 1 'Warrior' type monster and send it to the Graveyard. Once per turn, Select 1 monster in your Graveyard, hand or field, and remove it from play, in order to keep this monster on your side of the field. When the monster, that was sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect is removed from the Graveyard, Increase the ATK of this monster x.50 the amount of cards removed from play due to this card's Effect. DisclaimerI do not own artwork, for this image either, the creator of this image is "Pamansazz" on DA[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 It sounds really good, 1 part i myself would change While this card is under your control I would change it to While this card is on your side of the fieldSomething along those lines =P Besides that. pretty good card 9/10 Great work :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Thank you for your post Senbanzakura for your post and rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Master Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Pretty good, I see some ocg errors [as in do you mine "this card's name is treated as "Cyber Nega Dragon"" Don't you mean normal Cyber Dragon cuz it's name is already that. Also do you tribute the card it must be equipped with also...? and you have a 's after the wrong word... Still very good, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 if u look at DJ's raven card it has the same thing with the 'Name' thing.BTW i added a new Card 'Soul Armor fiend, Denzare' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 The first sentence took me awhile to understand. It should read: This monster can only by Summoned by tributing 1 "Cyber Dragon" equiped with "Negative Cyber" on your side of the field. Take out the 2nd sentence. I don't get why you need to point out the name but I'll look at Dj's Rave monster to see. If it's the newist one I faintly remember it being ".....also treated as "Cyber Raver Nucleon" but whatevs. Pretty good ^_^ 7/10 Card 2This monster can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 Warrior-Type monster. (To make it balenced I suggest saying that you have to control the monster)I'm not even sure how to word the 2nd part. My best guess would be "Each turn, you must remove from play 1 monster in your hand, Graveyard or on your side of the field. If you do not, destroy this monster.Increase the attack by .50? so doesn't that mean that for every 2 monsters removed he gains 1 ATK point? don't capitolize increase. The 2nd ones OK. 5/10 Overall 6/10. Good Job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Overall: 7.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 very nice picture bad effect in my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Pics are awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Thanks for the Advice!!!!Please post Pos replies aswell!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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