Senbanzakura Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Hi, I'm trying to make this card sound right, but well I'm tired and to me it doesn't =.= Maybe it sounds fine, thats why I'm coming to the Fine People Of YCM. What do you think?Edit: I hope this is a bit better :P @_@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Maybe it's like this:Activate this card only if your opponent declares a direct attack on you. Negate the attack by Tributing 1 Spellcaster-Type monster. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field. If you do this, your opponent must skip his next Battle Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Maybe it's like this:Activate this card only if your opponent declares a direct attack on you. Negate the attack by Tributing 1 Spellcaster-Type monster. Once per turn' date=' you can Tribute 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field. If you do this, your opponent must skip his next Battle Phase.[/i'] Thank you so much WYHE :P You gave me a great tip, i "Think" i know how to make it sound better, thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 Maybe it's like this:Activate this card only if your opponent declares a direct attack on you. Negate the attack by Tributing 1 Spellcaster-Type monster. Once per turn' date=' you can Tribute 1 Spellcaster-Type monster on your side of the field. If you do this, your opponent must skip his next Battle Phase.[/i'] Thank you so much WYHE :P You gave me a great tip, i "Think" i know how to make it sound better, thanks :DYou're welcome,just simply helping you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 good work!!!found some things i would want to mention1. Card image is not to realistic.2. (A)ttack, not attack! Capital3. Direct Attack on you.( )Nega... forgot the Space4. (O)pponent! CapitalRating: 7/10 not bard work!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 good work!!!found some things i would want to mention1. Card image is not to realistic.2. (A)ttack' date=' not attack! Capital3. Direct Attack on you.( )Nega... forgot the Space4. (O)pponent! CapitalRating: 7/10 not bard work!!![/quote'] Hey thanks :D I'm going to change them soonAppreciate the help ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 18, 2008 Report Share Posted June 18, 2008 That card would be overpowered in an all Spellcasters deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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