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Oh and just to let you guys all know I meant for this thread to just show that I like dinosaurs and not a mega card rating thread but I do appreciate any little card making help I can get.:)

Okay now this get's REAL I want people to tell me what dinosaur(or any prehistoric creature for that manner) you want me to make into a card.

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Do not combine Normal type Descriptions with Effects.

 

affected

 

EARTH

 

Life Points

 

OCG needs seriously rewording.

 

Picture quality needs upgrading.

 

effect / effect ???

 

Do not use stupid messages in the 'Limited' section.

 

Overpowered.

 

Needs more effort.

 

I suggest you read card making tutorials

 

 

1/10

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Okay, what I mean by Dino-support is that it gives protection to other dinos, soups them up, special summons them, etc. Ultimate Tyranno is something like this and is not defined as a Dino support because it does not do, erm, what I listed as forms of support.

 

Also, as to why it is overpowered, paying 1000 LP when the opponent is wide open is way too easy of a one-turn-KO. One thing that could fix this is by adding (this card cannot attack your opponent directly or this card cannot attack the next turn, etc. some effect that disables it somewhat in attacking).

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OCG errors, pic could use a backround... Unbalanced, 5.5/10. Sorry, but fix OXG (official card grammar) and lower attack by 1000 and make his effect have a downside or remove some of it. Then try to find a dinosaur with a backround... This isn't needed, it just makes the card have some pizzazz!

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