Thraze Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 these cards are the oppisite of the dark magician my cards will beat them 1 way or another so check em out yea alsome cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellKaiserofDarkness Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 OCG needs a lot of work. the idea is very unoriginal. but the pics are ok. Spelling is bad. 4/10. keep working on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyverno Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Hummmm...this is quite dificult these cards are quite netural,unfortunetly they are more worse that better... I give you a 3 and a half/10 Lets find out why... I agree with HellKaiser,these are VERY unoriginal.The spellings is also bad.However I have a couple more issues...These are the same cards only backwards.Next,you can't introduce a parallel version of DM without adding a deck to it,make a couple more cards dude.Last there is no such thing as a "Light Warlock" becasue warlocks are users of dark and demonic magic. Don't take the low score personally though,you should look at some of my other posts you've got a good concept going here,keep working at it and replace these cards with some new and improved versions Heres some suggestions from Wyevrno!:1.Change the name "Light Eradicator Warlock" to "Light Eradicator Cleric"2.Give the light magician a skill to give him a bonus when fighting dark magican after all light beats dark.3.Number 2,but with the Earadicatiors4.Add some more cards. Im watching you...and I expect the new & improved ones!Like I said just keep working at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 These cards.. are not original at all.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sasuke Cat Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 i'll give u 5/10Try to make better cards.... and do more cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blakcangel 9999 Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 I pesonaly think these aren't that bad. But I must agree, OCG needs some work and you should try and find better image for "Gandalf" but apart from that I don't see anything catastrophic. Just learn and though shall progress into a respected member. 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code Y.C.M Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 images are blurry, maybe look for different and better images, OCG is not all that bad, the last image is the best out off all of them. Make a Disclaimer, telling who is or are the artist(s). and if Effect to big to read, make a Lore explaining telling the Effect. BTW you do not have to make a Dark magician card, just go to Yugioh.wikia.org to search for yugioh images, and cards.Rating:Idea: 6/10Images: 3/10OCG: 8/10All over: 5/10Total: 22/40, you can do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord JZ of the Enigma Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 I also think you should make more than just these two. In all honesty I want to see a Light Magician Girl. Just curious, really I am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 2/10 lack of originality and effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 I really don't see the point, as they're almost exactly like their dark counterparts. 1/10 unoriginal; no effort. sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 lol..is that a pic of Gandalf...1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.