Bluephoenix Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Ok,I've been getting good reviews on all of my cards since I joined, but I've only done Warrior, Dragon, or Machine Monsters. I figured I could kill two birds with one stone and do a Zombie Ritual Monster. I want to know how to make my cards better, so any form of Criticism is appreciated.I don't own this picture,I'm just using it. This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell, "Death to the Skies". This card cannot attack if there are no other face-up Zombie-type monsters on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to the Graveyard, you may remove 2 Zombie-type monsters on your side of the field from play to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. This card cannot attack during your next Battle Phase after this card's effect was activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 8/10. Very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Thank you Sir! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 very good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Nice. Good effect and pic. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Thank you Sir! No problem. I think there was a minor spelling error somewhere in there... Can't remember. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted June 19, 2008 Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 Thank you Sir! No problem. I think there was a minor spelling error somewhere in there... Can't remember. I see no spelling errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluephoenix Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2008 I think conqueror is spelled Conquerror, but it was too late after I put up the thread. Thank you Kyro! Oh man, that's my first 10/10, Thanks Professor Cobra! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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