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Guest JoshIcy

Keep all your thread limited to about 3, well try to anyway ok? Makes it less of a clutter on the forum board.

 

This card is definitely interesting but if Armor Monsters are ever released into the normal TCG this is gonna be overpowered. Some OCG errors but I wont say unless you ask, (dont wanna be forceful and rude eh? ;) ). Maybe a small payment like 2 cards or something since you didnt specify how long it would last.....

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Guest JoshIcy

Lol I'm not expert... and atm having writers block sorry :|... But I know its off, and someone will be happy to oblige ^_^.

 

TIP: Ask a mod to merge your threads if possible, its cluttering lol ^_^

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I'm not an expert, but I have to say this card is quite interesting. I won't rate it, but there are several card grammar errors. Still, a nice card.

 

ooc: I believe you can send a private message to a moderator and ask them to merge your threads. Although, I think that only Super Moderators can do so. That is not a fact known to me, but PM someone like Darth Broaward or Falling Pizza.

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I'll help.

 

"You can switch the ATK of this card with the ATK of a face-up monster your opponent controls. If you activate this effect, you cannot activate it again until your 2nd Main Phase 1 after activation."

 

Oh, I know I failed that as well, but it makes more sense.

 

A level 4 that can kill ANYTHING. No.

Level 7, AT LEAST. And keep the stats it has, too.

Perhaps weaken it by giving it 1000 defense and making it go to Defense Position after it attacks.

 

As it is, it's horribly broken.

 

However, the concept is great, and the artwork is great.

Name choice is strange, as well, as "leviathan" is a species of creatures as opposed to a name, and "the jealous ONE" usually implies a name rather than a species.

 

5.2/10 as is, 7.3/10 when updated.

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