Cryo Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 I think im over doing it on the effects :(. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 still they are good ideas but have OCG errors and bad grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 Once you improve on your capitalization and punctuation, your effects will be about perfect! Also, try looking for more unique, better quality pictures! Overall, great effort! -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 20, 2008 Report Share Posted June 20, 2008 What glasstin said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ded!cateD Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 Bad OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SliferMigi Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 "roll a 20-sided each turn" a 20 sided what? a know it's sort of obvious its a dice but sum ppl might not realise, and where are you gunna get one of those from anyway? and i dont like the effect of A.I Genesis, decide your own effects? that will take too long and take away fun from the duel. bad OCG aswell 3/10 OS, i dont know if these cards link in with others you have made so forgive me if i seem harsh i just dont think the 1st card has a very good concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cryo Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 yeah i could do better, and i think im lightin the cards up a lil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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