The Don's Den of Imagination! (UPDATED 7/6/08!)

[DonRoyale]

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE PICTURES USED IN THE CARDS. I HAVE THE ARTISTIC ABILITY OF A BLIND DUCK AND THEREFORE COULDN'T DRAW THAT GOOD IF MY LIFE DEPENDED ON THEM. I NINJAED THESE PICTURES FROM DEVIANT ART, YOU'LL FIND MOST OF THESE BY SEARCHING THEM UP.

 

Ah, my first try at this. I worked for a long time getting these done. Some I'm happy with, others...well, it's easy to tell.

 

-NOTE: I KNOW THE CARD ART I USE SUCKS. DON'T REMIND ME. I WANT CRITIQUE BASED ON THE ORIGINALITY AND USEFULNESS OF THE CARDS I HAVE CREATED, NOT HOW MUCH THE CARD ART BLOWS. THANK YOU!-

 

First, the incomplete set of Ancient Energy (ACEG-EN). I'm missing a lot of cards from the set, because I haven't progressed far enough in my fan fiction story to get enough ideas for new Dragon-Type monsters to use in the story yet.

 

 

 

Armored Wyvern - Rare

 

Black-Eyes Gray Dragon (HORRIBLE, GAWD) - Ultra Rare

 

Blazing Fury (got a great picture for this one) - Super Rare

 

Burrow Dragon - Common

 

Burst Flare Dragon - Common

 

Cobalt Dragon - Rare

 

Dragon Commander - Common

 

Dragon's Fang - Common

 

Dragon's Tear - Common

 

Eclipse Dragon - Rare

 

Elemental Deity - Rare

 

Fangbreaker Dragon - Rare

 

Floating Clay Fortress - Super Rare

Fusion materials are 1 EARTH monster and 1 WIND monster. It's a WIND and an EARTH monster (sort of like Light and Darkness Dragon, but for WIND/EARTH as opposed to LIGHT/DARK) Once per turn, it can kill something with less ATK than it and deal damage to your opponent equal to the difference between the monster's ATK points. It can't attack during the turn you use it. So, it's like an attack, but it passes by Sakuretsu, Mirror Force, and Gravity Bind. Thing is, it only kills something that's face-up.

 

Flute of Calling Dragon - Common

 

Frostflare Dragon - Super Rare

Fusion materials are 1 FIRE and 1 WATER monster. It counts as both FIRE and WATER. When it kills something in battle, the destroyed monster's ATK comes out of the opponent's Life Points. When it attacks, it stalls all your opponent's face-up monsters, as they can't declare an attack during your opponent's next turn. Any face-down monster that's Flip Summoned can still attack, and so can any newly summoned monsters.

 

Gigantus Dragon - Ultra Rare

 

Grudge Inferno - Ultra Rare

 

Jade Dragon - Super Rare

 

Mist Shroud - Common

 

Mythic Mirror - Common

 

Mythical Brutality - Super Rare

 

Roar of Armies - Super Rare

 

Scar Dragon - Ultra Rare

 

Serpent of Thorns - Rare

As if Blonfire/Gigaplant wasn't broken enough.

 

Skies of Myth - Rare

 

Tempest Dragon - Super Rare

It gets one effect based on the next card effect your opponent uses. It can only get one per turn. If it's a monster effect, Tempest responds by killing a monster on the field. If it's a spell, Tempest halves the ATK of all your opponent's face-up monsters. If it's a Trap, Tempest becomes immune to traps until the end of the turn.

 

The Arbiter - Solencio - Ultimate Rare

My Egyptian God Card. Of course, it's banned, but I thought it would be nice to try and make one. It has the Egyptian God staples; unaffected by traps, spells only work for a turn, and it's summoned by tributing 3 monsters. Its ATK and DEF are the combined power of what was sacrificed to summon it. It can give up 1000 ATK to destroy a card on the field. You can tribute a monster to give its ATK to Solencio. Broken, of course, but banned.

 

Thorn Dog - Common

 

Thorn Lord - Ultra Rare

 

Tidal Dragon - Common

 

Twinlance Dragon - Rare

 

Typhoon Fairy - Common

 

Uproot - Common

 

Vengeance Dragon - Common

 

Winds of Myth - Common

 

Wyvern Dragon - Super Rare

 

 

 

Now, for the cards I wish to be reviewed for now. I'm going to post the ones that still require an image seperately. (Will explain small-fonted effects in detail later; it's past 3 A.M., I need sleep first...:#)

 

I give you...Power of the Legends! (POTL-EN)

 

 

 

Here's the stuff without images. Check this out for the card effects, and let me know what you think. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=EMFS-EN - Finished Set]

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE ART. The onwers are displayed in the bottom-right corner of the page, based on their DeviantArt accounts.

 

EMFS-EN001-Orc Flaresword

 

EMFS-EN002-Undersea Shark

 

EMFS-EN003-Littlebird

 

EMFS-EN004-Golem Guardian

 

EMFS-EN005-Pyro Lich

 

EMFS-EN006-Dragonfire Sorcerer

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 4 FIRE monsters in your Graveyard from play. Each time the controller of this card would take Battle Damage, that damage can be negated by removing 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard from play. If you do, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Battle Damage you would have taken.

 

 

EMFS-EN007-Lava Basilisk

 

EMFS-EN008-Phoenix Scout

[spoiler=Effect]You can send this card from your hand to the Graveyard during your Main Phase to look at your opponent's hand. Select one card from it, and shuffle that card into your opponent's Deck. During your Standby Phase, if you have no Spell or Trap Cards on your side of the field, you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.

 

 

EMFS-EN009-Valiant Phoenix

 

EMFS-EN010-D.D. Phoenix

[spoiler=Effect]When this card battles an opponent's monster, after damage calculation you can remove this card from play and Special Summon one of your monsters that is currently removed from play. You cannot Special Summon a "D.D. Phoenix" with this effect.

 

 

EMFS-EN011-Arsonist General

 

EMFS-EN012-Infernal Arsonist

 

EMFS-EN013-Ice Cretin

 

EMFS-EN014-Snow Wing

 

EMFS-EN015-Blizzard Magician

 

EMFS-EN016-Snow Spirit

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing all WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play when there are at least 3 WATER monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy a number of cards on the field equal to the number of WATER monsters removed from play by this effect. The ATK and DEF of this card are equal to the number of cards destroyed by this effect x400 points. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn it is Special Summoned.

 

 

EMFS-EN017-Wulf Apparition

 

EMFS-EN018-Sacred Seal

[spoiler=Effect]When this card is attacked and destroyed as a result of battle while there is a face-up "Aurora Borealis" on your side of the field, your opponent selects and activates one of the following effects:

-Your opponent sends all cards in their hand to the Graveyard.

-The ATK of all face-up monsters your opponent controls becomes 0 until your opponent's next Standby Phase.

 

 

EMFS-EN019-Glacier Bear

 

EMFS-EN020-Blizzard Dragon

 

EMFS-EN021-Stealth Golem

 

EMFS-EN022-Winged Golem

 

EMFS-EN023-Grudge Golem

[spoiler=Effect]Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you have a face-up "Colosus Coliseum" on your side of the field, you can destroy one face-up monster your opponent controls whose ATK is higher than this card. If you activate this effect, you take damage equal to the difference between the destroyed monster's ATK and this card's ATK, and this card cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

 

EMFS-EN024-Sentinel Golem

 

EMFS-EN025-Mechanized Golem

 

EMFS-EN026-Lunar Golem

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 EARTH monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned, if there is a face-up "Colossus Coliseum" on your side of the field, destroy all face-up monsters on your opponent's side of the field. By taking 1 EARTH monster that is currently removed from play and placing it in the Graveyard, you can negate 1 of your opponent's attacks.

 

 

EMFS-EN027-Spell Golem

 

EMFS-EN028-Deity Golem

 

EMFS-EN029-Blast Bullet

 

EMFS-EN030-Breeze Frog

 

EMFS-EN031-Gale Force Dragon

 

EMFS-EN032-Sky Dragon Deadaleus

[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 WIND monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Special Summoned, return all Spell and Trap Cards on the field to their respective onwer's hands. When this card is destroyed by a card effect your opponent controls, or when this card is attacked and destroyed in battle, destroy all Spell and Trap Cards on the field.

 

 

EMFS-EN033-Sky Jar

[spoiler=Effect]FLIP: Both players shuffle all monsters they control into their respective Decks. Both players then pick up (not draw) cards from their Decks until a Level 4 or lower monster is picked up. Those monsters are Special Summoned to the owner's side of the field in face-up Attack Position. All other picked up cards are shuffled into the onwer's Decks.

 

 

EMFS-EN034-Hawk Raider

 

EMFS-EN035-Babylon Assailant

 

EMFS-EN036-Dragonfly

 

EMFS-EN037-Sky High Dragon

 

EMFS-EN038-Glacier Dragon

 

EMFS-EN039-Doom Colossus

 

EMFS-EN040-Terror Phoenix

[spoiler=Effect]This card can only be Special Summoned from the Fusion Deck by removing 2 monsters with "Phoenix" in their card names in your Graveyard from play. If this card is destroyed by an opponent's card effect, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card this way, draw 1 card.

 

 

EMFS-EN041-Aurora Borealis

 

EMFS-EN042-Colossus Coliseum

 

EMFS-EN043-Babylon, the Ancient City

 

EMFS-EN044-Skies of Blaze

 

EMFS-EN045-Glacial Seal

 

EMFS-EN046-Snow Flower

 

EMFS-EN047-Soul Burn

[spoiler=Effect]When this card is equipped to a monster, you can send any number of FIRE monsters from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard. The equipped monster gains ATK equal to the number of monsters sent to the Graveyard by this effect x1000. When the equipped monster battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of the attacking equipped monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Destroy the equipped monster during the End Phase.

 

 

EMFS-EN048-Burning Tornado

 

EMFS-EN049-Overgrowth

 

EMFS-EN050-Light at the End of the Tunnel

 

EMFS-EN051-Still Winds

 

EMFS-EN052-Babylon’s Sunset

 

EMFS-EN053-Burning Trap Hole

 

EMFS-EN054-Inner Fire

 

EMFS-EN055-Crystalize

 

EMFS-EN056-Blizzard Blast

 

EMFS-EN057-Wrath of the Sky

 

EMFS-EN058-Tempest Strike

 

EMFS-EN059-Light Feet

 

EMFS-EN060-Colossus Malfunction

 

 

Let me know what you think.

And let me know if you find unexplained cards' texts difficult to read. I'll explain them.

[HelioSpark]

wow, these are very good for a new member. Your ocg is rather good, and I like the effects. Some of the pics could be better though.

 

8/10 because these are amazing for a newbie

[TIBONE LUIS]

sorry...but alot of those pics are horrible...they are either too small or have no background...work on it and im sure youll get better

[Yasu]

9\10 good...

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Couple pics could use backgrounds. 8/10

[TIBONE LUIS]

dang seems my judgment is overruled...now that i looked at the OCG and effects they are pretty good just work on the pics...7.5/10

[DonRoyale]

I know the pics are HORRIBLE.

I just said "to hell with it, I'm just getting the pictures quickly and going with them..."

 

If I could draw them, they'd be a lot better.

 

Thank you for the feedback, but I'd appreciate more based on the cards and not their steaming-pile-of-crap pictures. Thank you! :)

[Titus]

lol Aside the pics, you did pretty good with this. A few errors on a few of the cards, but good for a newbie. ;)

[blackved]

These cards are good but some of the pictures need help.

8/10

[DonRoyale]

Titus, don't be afraid to point out those errors. :)

[Titus]

I know I won't catch them all, so I'll just skim over them and point out the ones that are more obvious.

 

Blazing Fury - pretty sure you don't need the comma (,) after "field". Also, I think "conduct your Battle Phase" is wrong. I'd change it to "[You must] skip your Battle Phase during the turn you activate this card." or something like that.

 

Burrow Dragon - again, I'm not sure about this, but I think you have to say "opponent's Life Points". And I just recently started paying attention to this, but I know you can say "their" instead of "his/her". I don't think his/her is wrong, but I know "their" is correct.

 

Burst Flare Dragon - I hate cards like this, because there aren't many cards with effects like this, so OCG is iffy for me. I like the effect, but I hate trying to make correct OCG with effects like this. I'm not even going to try to word it. :P

 

Dragon's Fang - "Activate only when"...only is a big factor with this card. Otherwise, you can activate it whenever you want.

 

Dragon's Tear - "one" = 1

 

 

 

I gave up after that. You put up a lot of cards. :P I can try some more later, but that was just to give you an idea. I'm not perfect with OCG, so I still like when people correct me. So before you go changing your cards because of what I said, you may want to get a second opinion. ;)

[DonRoyale]

Regarding Blazing Fury, I don't need the comma. :S

 

Burrow Dragon doesn't need "opponent's Life Points", I'm 99% positive on that.

 

Dragon's Fang...DOH. :(

 

Dragon's Tear...another obvious one.

[Noble Legend]

Pics could be better, but you warned us. 7/10 :)

[N00B Hunter]

First of all, YOUR CARDS ARE NOT FIRST EDITION!!! Putting the words "1st Edition" on a card doesn't make it 1st Edition, you need a gold sticker... les'se, overpowered cards are:

 

"Blazing Fury" -- a REALLY BIG smashing ground... overpowered

 

"Burst Flare" would be limited, but not OP.

"Cobalt Dragon" is very overpowered... just about invincible to effects that try to kill him (how are you going to get 2 effects that destroy him in the same turn?) and with high ATK, and the ability to implement that ATK in battle as he pleases...

 

"Dragon Commander" can have a max. 4000 ATK, which is wayyy much for a lvl 3 monster... broken.

 

"Dragon's Fang" a Spell Speed 2 Pot of Greed with an easily-filled situational requirement, making Dragon decks very overpowered... so the card is banned as well..

 

"Dragon's Tear" tribute summon BEWD, then have it attack three times... yeah, not so smart...

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You know what, I'm done? These cards aren't quality... it's just a bunch of cards quickly assembled because you like Dragons (the set in the TCG already recieving some of the monster suppport, next to Fiends)...

 

I declare 1/10th of this set actually TCG-considerable (none of it is worthy..., due to the fact that most of the cards are unoriginal, overpowered, or have bad pictures... You need to make a few cards over a longer period of time, instead of throwing together a bunch of useless cards, wasting the already-diminished bandwidth of our internet... make something quality; with thought.. and make it not related to dragons...

 

You might as well pitch the set.

[DonRoyale]

1st edition is a preference. Gold stickers are meaningless to me.

 

Blazing Fury...I think you mean Stamping Destruction, not Smashing Ground...

It isn't overpowered. The whole idea of destroying spells and traps is to have a clear field from which to declare attacks with. Since you can't attack during the turn you activate it, it's not overpowered. Plus, you lose all your spells and traps as well.

 

Burst Flare is useless. It just sits there waiting for you to take Battle Damage, and has to be face-up to work. Summoning a 600 isn't smart unless you're doing something along the lines of suiciding D.D. Warrior Lady into something to kill it, whereas you'd take the Battle Damage and inflict 1000. Plus, Burst Flare is better used swinging directly for 1200 than automatically dying (notice I didn't make it a choice) for 1000.

 

Cobalt isn't nearly as overpowered as you perceive him to be. It only works on effects that TARGET, which is few and far between. Plus, in the case of a monster, it doesn't destroy it. Getting it in face-up Defense Position is hard enough, as it would require either summoning him, then switching him next turn (provided he lives that long), or having you TRIBUTE SET (and aside from the odd Guardian Sphinx, who in their right mind does that?) and have your opponent be ogodstupid enough to have a <1400 run into it. Plus, I geared it with 2300 ATK specifically to fail to Monarchs. >.>

 

Dragon Commander, broken? People don't complain about Goblin King, and he's a Level 1, IIRC. Equip it with Opti-Camouflage, and it makes my Commander broken in comparison how exactly?

 

Fang's text is off, but seriously, it's not as broken as some cards like the engine for Lightsworn (I forget its name; you draw 2 cards, then send the top four cards of your deck to the grave; it's a spell which requires a Lightsworn to use. You could mill four different Lightsworn monsters for Judgement Dragon, or the Lightsworn monster that hits the field when it's sent from the deck to the grave automatically.).

 

Dragon's Tear is only useful if you can get enough monsters dead that turn. Perhaps I should re-word it in that the count of dead dragons starts after its activation.

 

...Honestly, I tried Dragons only because I made up the concept a while back, when I was a complete n00b to the game of Yu-Gi-Oh!, and I had to revive the story for it, ergo, I had to revive the concept.

 

I'm going to try and get my Alchemy strategy up soon. I can't promise any more quality in the pictures, but it will be a more original idea than just making dragons something other than "lol, I have to keep my monsters alive to tribute, oh, they died, all my hand is 7 star dragons, I need to pick up something. ODAM, another tribute dragon."

 

Sorry if I wanted to breathe life into what I felt was a dead engine in the game. >.>

[Apocolypse]

Some of the pics are awsome, some others not so, you did pretty good for your first, 8.5/10

[DonRoyale]

I am bumping this to announce that I'm going to take another crack at this, updating my other story's stuff soon.

 

I hope you guys don't mind the wait.

The stuff will be much more original, so I hope you don't mind.

[RacecaR]

8/10

[DonRoyale]

Bumpasaurus.

Gonna start work on the new series now...

[jes47]

i think most of them are good[/i]

[DonRoyale]

*whew*

 

Took me 35 minutes to upload them all, but I updated! Let me know what you think!

[The Ruby]

card art isnt that great but, nice OCG ;)

[DonRoyale]

Bumpasaurus!

[~ Chidori-Kun]

pretty good 9/10

[Amethyst Phoenix]

The Aleion likes these cards. They make opponents go bye-bye. I can really Ale it up with these. ROFL. They're pretty good, 7.89/10