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Shredder

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  • 3 years later...

10 posts and this guy hasn't received a SINGLE helpful comment. Tsk tsk.

First off, I don't know what those <> are in the ATK and DEF are, but they don't belong there.

Second, vanillas are boring.

Third, there are many unneeded capitals in the (boring) lore.

 

Just make it more creative, give it a little more thought, add an effect, and then we'll talk.

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1) The ATK and DEF aren't real. They can be "?" instead.

2) Add some more "pazazz" to this card. Nothing stands out.

3) If you're going to make a non-effect-er card, make the story interesting, seriously.

4) If this is going to be a God Card, it has to have an effect.

5) This card isn't very good. [3.2/10]

 

Finally, a helpful comment.

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I hate to be cruel... But if you don't know much about Yu-Gi-Oh! The Card Game and Yu-Gi-Oh Cards themselves you shouldn't be making your own Yu-Gi-Oh Cards... At least, under the "Realistic" Section.

 

That Aside, if it's meant to be a God Card, look them up on google in order to follow the correct OCG for them. Try to make it unique, and if it has ? ATK points, it needs an effect that gives it ATK points, no exceptions.

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