bury the year Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 [align=center]Just a mechanic I was fooling around with... Card Lore: When this card inflicts Battle Damage, for every "Der Engel von Staub" you control, remove from play 2 random Spell Cards from your opponent's Deck. Neither players can look at cards removed by this effect while they are removed from play. When your opponent activates a Spell Card, you can Tribute this card to send all cards that were removed by this card's effect to their respective owner's Graveyards. Then, if the activated card shares its name with a sent card, negate its activation and effect and destroy it. Rate and review, and please tell me if I screwed up the name! I'm not at all good with German... Thanks!P.S.: Thanks to Meti for finding my screw-up in the name. ^_^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 well the first leeter in "Von" needs to be capitalized...and im as blind as a bat...can you put the effect in spoiler er somthing?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 well the first leeter in "Von" needs to be capitalized...and im as blind as a bat...can you put the effect in spoiler er somthing?? Umm, sure... That's up. However, my intuition says to keep ithe "von" as it is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 awesome 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 I like it. Good pic too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 21, 2008 Report Share Posted June 21, 2008 ...I have never heard of the german word Staub before....Care to translate..and maybe I can put through my german teacher? Because I'm too sure if "von" is supposed to be there... Good effect though...8/10, I'll bump it up if I can get the correct version of the name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 ...I have never heard of the german word Staub before....Care to translate..and maybe I can put through my german teacher? Because I'm too sure if "von" is supposed to be there... Good effect though...8/10' date=' I'll bump it up if I can get the correct version of the name...[/quote'] "Staub" means "dust". I looked it up using an online dictionary, so whatever you find that's different is most likely right. Thanks for the rate, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Alright...Well then, the only thing wrong is the "Das" it should be "Der"...Sense Engel is supposed to be in Masciline Tense...And never use an online dictionary again...You got lucky this time. So it should be "Der Engel Von Staub" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 This thing gives people headaches.That is why it wins. 8.6/10 - Card effect11/10 - Artwork, absolutely brilliant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Um, bump. This was the first thread on the second page, so don't get too mad at me. I made the name change, too. (thanks, Meti) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 No problem...Just come to me if you ever need any more help with any german translations or fixes, and I'll run it through. 9.6/10 on the card BTW. The picture is really nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 22, 2008 Report Share Posted June 22, 2008 Interesting idea. The name is...okay, and the pic is pretty good. overall - 13.33/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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