Sonic Series cards!!!! set 1

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[CeDeFiA]

NICE CARDS

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There are a few problems.

 

1: OCG errors. (Official card grammar) Instead of saying (Please note this is only an example) "This card is not destroyed when a monster attacks, but if two monsters attack on the same turn it is destroyed and sent to the graveyard or your hand if you have 3 cards on the field." But you would say "This card is not destroyed as a result of battle. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, this card is not destroyed. When this card would normally be destroyed and sent to the graveyard, if you have 3 cards on your side of the field, this card is sent to your hand instead."

 

2: Spelling errors. Please take the time or some more time to try to patch up all the spelling errors.

 

3: OP, or overpowered. Some effects or cards are a bit too powerful. I suggest either lowering stars and massively lowering attack, and lowering attack and defense gain from spell/trap cards. Instead of making a monster gain 1200 attack, make him gain 600, or in that neighborhood. If a card makes a monster gain attack every round, make sure the attack is really low, somewhere around 100-200 attack, or the monster becomes unstoppable too soon.

 

If you change some of these around, these cards will be great! They have good potential.