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popeyes1

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Let me count some mistakes.

1. Your OCG is not good. For one, you don't specify where you summon each ssj Goku from or where your remove "goku" (ssj4 goku's effect). Also, what is a "dragonball z character"? I know what it "is" but it doesn't work on a card since you have not defined what a "dragonball z character" is in yugioh terms.

2. pictures could be better.

3. While the summoning effect is original, you could have at least added some other effect to the levels above ssj1.

Overall, you get 6/10, please fix your mistakes.

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