SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 [align=center]I've noticed that my popularity on this site has slipped, so I've decided to make a Comeback. ^_^ I feel the need for a comeback cause I feel hella-unappreciated. I also don't try to get involved with newer members and maybe that's why they don't post on my threads. I want to be known on this Forum, ya know? I know I'm known by the older members on this site, but I want to be known as a legend by all. :P How I'm I going to make a comeback you ask? Here is a list of ways how I will do it: 1. Be a More Cheerful and Funny Member2. Post on more threads3. Make more GFX and Cards4. Become a better GFX Artist and Card Maker5. Talk to people more6. Contribute to YCM more often Now I know, that's a lot of stuff. But I can practice 4 things that will help me comeback on this thread, and they are numbers 1,3,4 and 5. When I post my cards, there is a certain form I will post them in: Card - The Card itself, duhInspiration - What inspired me to make the cardSong I Listened - The song I listened while making the cardOCG Help - Who helped me with OCG and GrammarEffect - My effects are long, so I will post them for better viewing If you find OCG Errors, please point them out. But do not, and I repeat do not, rate my card on my OCG and Grammar. I'm Interesting Effect guy, and my OCG isn't perfect but it's better than most. Shini's Comeback Cards [Total: 1] Card: Machina - War Android 2.0Inspiration: I found the Iron Man Image and had to use itSong I Listened: Mario Barrett - How Do I BreatheOCG Help: Darth BrowarodEffect: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect. When this card is removed from your side of the field, you may select 2 "Machina - War Android 2.0" from your Hand and/or Deck and remove them from play to Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position on your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned, this card gains the following effect:"Whenever this card battles with a Monster, destroy the monster it battled with immediately with this card's effect. Whenever this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, remove it from play instead." [The images on the cards aren't Shini's. They are there to make Shini have a better chance of a comeback. People like cool images. But for real, they aren't Shini's. Shini don't steal, son. These image are from Photobucket and Deviantart.][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 That's cool card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Lol, Iron Man!!!! I like it already XD But, seriously, it's a very nice card. Would suck if it got limited, though :P overall - 13.56/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Not bad lol its definitely a good card ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Nicely done dude! I like it...Only problem is, is I can't really read the effect..Sorry, it's my eye sight. Can you post the effect underneath the card, please? And then I can rate it. But not in my new system. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Nicely done dude! I like it...Only problem is' date=' is I can't really read the effect..Sorry, it's my eye sight. Can you post the effect underneath the card, please? And then I can rate it. But not in my new system.[/quote'] No prob ;) And thanks to you guys who commented. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 ..Not bad...My only problem is when you select the 2 cards after this card is removed...Shouldn't it be remove from play? or sent to the Graveyard? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 ..Not bad...My only problem is when you select the 2 cards after this card is removed...Shouldn't it be remove from play? or sent to the Graveyard? My save button screwed up :lol: It's supposed to say remove from play, I'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Okay....9.5/10 using my new system BTW!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 Thanks ;) Well, I got to go Football Practice. Be back in 6 hours ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 awesome card Shini, 9.6/10 (extra points for Iron man pic^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 25, 2008 Report Share Posted June 25, 2008 lol.. its Iron man.. xD *goes and tells Brow to move it behind shini's back.* j.k Its good. I kinda like it, even though I know what the image is. :P Nice job.. PS: Im gonna be the member who is the legend. :P Hence my name. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafronzo Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 wow very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 It seems even Browarod missed a few OCG glitches. Machina's OCG: This card cannot be Special Summoned except by its own effect. When this card is removed from the field, you can remove from play 2 "Machina - War Android 2.0" from your hand or Deck to Special Summon this card in Attack Position. When this card is Special Summoned, this card gains the following effect: -Whenever this card battles with a monster controlled by your opponent, destroy the monster it battled with immediately with this card's effect. When this card is destroyed by battle, remove it from play. That should be better. Pic is ok despite being Ironman. Pretty balanced. Nice disclaimer XD. 7.1/10 Pretty good, could use a little work, keep on truckin'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 hand is not capped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 You keep going Hunter ;) Thanks you guys. Also, never mind. Don't correct OCG errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlargTucker Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 I like the Iron Man pic =). Effect is all right, and maybe I'm not reading this properly, but how exactly do you destroy this monster as a result of battle, if and monster battling this is destroyed immediately? "Deus Ex Machina came to save his friend..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 I like the Iron Man pic =). Effect is all right' date=' and maybe I'm not reading this properly, but how exactly do you destroy this monster as a result of battle, if and monster battling this is destroyed immediately? "Deus Ex Machina came to save his friend..."[/quote'] You don't. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 [align=left]Be more cheerful and funny member? I know that kind of guy called S......... I forgot his name on IM oh I'm sorry I mean Shini. :DAnyway this card is great in the following:OCGHolographic EffectPicture Name (not that much)And add some dice and everything will be nice.Overall: Great JobRating: ?/The whole set. I need to see them all. :P[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 lol Well that's on MSN. I use words there I can't use here... ;) But thanks :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 Thumbs up buddy. My Rating: 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 Thanks Death Metal ^_^ New Card coming up in a little while Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 I'd like to rate the upcoming card...can't wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Sorry, couldn't make the new card. Football practice. I'm working on it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Wow, very nice card shini :D and i know how you feel about that decrease in popularity ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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