Horus86 Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 this is my first set of cards. it is unfinished. plz r/f:) :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 YOu need to work on the structure of sentences. SOme of them are confusing.Dusk Dragon has "tribute it" and "send it to the graveyard" as parts of the same effects. Tributing means sending to graveyard.Watch the "field" word, try not to type "feild" all the time.War Savior is awesome, but imagine you have bad Reaction to Simochi. Maybe too powerful?Earthquake - imagine with Dark World, how much can you gain for that card? YOu draw 5 cards, you have 3 Goldds and 1 Sillva in your hand...Dragon's Gardna should have something like "Your opponent cannot chain to the activation of an effect that would destroy a Spell or Trap card(s) on their side of the field" in my opinion. Not being able to negate still allows them to chain the cards that are about to be destroyed.I like all the cards though. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horus86 Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 thanks a lot dude. much appreciated. i will fix then when i have a chance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teramaster Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 You're welcome :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 Overused pics. OCG errors.Fragment in sentence errors.I don't know...not original.Angel of Death...meh. Too many of them created.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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