HelioSpark Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 My first card as a 5 star!I do not own the art for this card.Just so you all know, "Progeny" means offspring, or child. It can also mean "children", but I'm using it as "child"EDITED EDITION: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 "deceitful"and OCG errors somewhere i think....8.5/10congrats on getting your 5th star!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 woops! thanks for the fix on that, I should have caught that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 Nice card, though it has a nasty bite to it :P I didn't see any OCG errors, so that's good, and the effect seems underpowered, actually. Is there a reason for the line about effect damage becoming 2000? If not, then it makes the card rather underpowered, at least to me. Otherwise, though, it's a good card. overall - 13.27/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 I like the pic, I like the effect, I say 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 yes! calculating out browarods rating...it equals about a 9.7!!!thats the highest rating I have gotten on any card! Thank you all for your comments, they are greatly appreciated^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 1. Congratulations. 2. Bonus points for using the word "Progeny" in a card. It's nice to not see the same 5 words used again and again and....you get the point. 3. What Broward said. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 ^ I know, I knew I wanted to set the name apart from other names somehow.....and I came up with that! and thanks^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
haely0 Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 trickey one 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 thanks:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 pretty good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 It's good, however, I feel that you crammed too many different effects into a single card. Try to streamline next time. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 I think the fact that it has so many effects makes it a bit... I don't know... overpowered, maybe? What's "Releasing?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enigma Zero Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 "Release" is the new OCG for Tributing. ;)Â Read me for more details. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 6/10...savvy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetsumei75 Posted June 26, 2008 Report Share Posted June 26, 2008 Awesome name, great pic, unique effect, and not overpowered. Great job!! The only thing I don't understand is "As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any damage you take from an opponent's card effect becomes 2000." Care to explain what that means? 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 ^say your opponent uses tremendous fire on you. You would have taken 1000 points of damage, but if this card is on the field you would lose 2000Â but that doesn't matter now, because I removed that effect. I think that "streamlines" it a little bit^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 I likey the pic-ey ^_^Â 9/10. Some great stuff here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Hmm, a well made card and a well desserved 5th star. 9.8/10. AND CONGRATZÂ ooc: I too just got my 5th star today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Thank you both^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Light of Destruction Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Nice card, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Wombat, you and I are from the next generation, you have reached 1000 I'm nearing 1000. One day, we'll be legends! Anyway... Second sentence should be "Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard.  3rd should be "Until the end of the turn, this card gains ATK equal to half of that monster's ATK." (Check PoC) If=When in the 4th sentence. opponents needs an apostrophe. I like it. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 w00t! go next generation! Â thanx for the fixes, I'll edit it shortly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dad Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 ooc: Heh! Don't forget Zaraki! I'm part of that generation too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Zaraki: Yeah but with the way you rack up posts you'll be way ahead of us in no time. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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