dragonstudios Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 please rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Major OCG probs and bad grammar...fix and i'll rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkRemix14 Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Yea I Agree with TIBONE LUIS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Worst grammar I've seen all day.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 basic grammar and OCG problems, and i don't think the pic go'es great with the card, just work on those, and you'll be making great cards ;) PM me for any help ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YurkaThePure Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 I agree, the grammar is despicable. Also, since it's a Continuous Spell, you might want to put "Once per Turn you may Special Summon one Token", or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonstudios Posted June 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 thanks I will work on those Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
7Chris Crash Posted June 27, 2008 Report Share Posted June 27, 2008 Bad OCG. 2/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 dang, ocg is.. atrocious Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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