Glorious eXcess Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 [align=center] Credit goes to Mike Shinoda of Linkin Park I use images to improve the overall quality of my card. Nuff Sed.[/align] Shiz. Forgot. Cataclysmic Chains are when certain "Abstract" cards are destroyed, and other effects from the Deck take place, like Card of Abstractness is destroyed. It's effect says to activate a Cataclysmic Chain, shuffle my Deck, then draw 5 cards. From those 5, I pay ____ Life Points to keep ___ amount of Cards. In math terms: $$$x whereas $$$= life points per card, and x=cards you want to keep. You must keep 1 card, atleast, or the Chain doesn't count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TIBONE LUIS Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Strange!! lol...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted June 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Ok. Thats nice to know...NEXT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luxlord Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 I think its a great cardvery original and could become an actual card (it has that duel monsters artwork feeling to it) 9.9/10no ones perfect but you can become close Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Excellent idea behind your card... but I have 2 problems: The idea of "Cataclysm Chain" effects and "Abstract" monsters isn't whole, yet. You need to get to that (What's the Spell Speed of a "Cataclysm Chain"? Why is it that only a certain monster-type gets this effect; wouldn't that make it overpowered? there's more..). You need to round out the idea, because there's a lot of stuff you're missing, and a lot of stuff that really doesn't add up. Secondly, this card gives you 2 draws in a turn (not a draw and a pick-up, but 2 draws...), which is 1000 LP from "Solemn Wishes"... and jacks up your chances of drawing the right cards for situations to 200% of normal... that's insanely high. Non-realistic for the 1st part, and overpowered for the 2nd.But those things are pretty easy to fix, and I look forward to seeing you make more of these kinds of cards! (Couldn't you make "Abstract" text, like "Spirit", "Union", or "Gemini", etc?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 I think the pic is interesting, but could be a little bit better. Grammaically, don't capitalize tribute unless you are using Tribute Summmon or Tribute Summoned. Normally, you can't summon any monster from your hand. This effect is a little overpowered. So, limit to level 4 or a monster with an ATK of 2000 or 2100 the max. Use during instead of on. On the final effect, it should be:Inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points due to the effect of 'Cataclysm Chain'. With only 800 ATK, you can increase its ATK to 1000, or reduce its level to 2. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 -Pic...meh.-Effect...trash. Plus...OCG...not good.-The type...WHAT?!?!? Should either be a monster or a rock...thing.-In total...3.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 wicked your a god and evan better than ra in a baTTLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Wow...That's very nice. Quite a bit of awesome their, CoS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted June 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 wicked your a god and evan better than ra in a baTTLE You really have to die... Excellent idea behind your card... but I have 2 problems: The idea of "Cataclysm Chain" effects and "Abstract" monsters isn't whole' date=' yet. You need to get to that (What's the Spell Speed of a "Cataclysm Chain"? Why is it that only a certain monster-type gets this effect; wouldn't that make it overpowered? there's more..). You need to round out the idea, because there's a lot of stuff you're missing, and a lot of stuff that really doesn't add up. Secondly, this card gives you 2 draws in a turn (not a draw and a pick-up, but 2 draws...), which is 1000 LP from "Solemn Wishes"... and jacks up your chances of drawing the right cards for situations to 200% of normal... that's insanely high. Non-realistic for the 1st part, and overpowered for the 2nd.But those things are pretty easy to fix, and I look forward to seeing you make more of these kinds of cards! (Couldn't you make "Abstract" text, like "Spirit", "Union", or "Gemini", etc?)[/quote'] Thanks. The cataclysm chain and abstract is random. "abstract" types are absrtact because of effects, stats, and mostly, picture. 2- Solemn Wishes? True, but, hey, it makes you deck thinner. Plus, wait until you see the next card's effect. Thanks though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
v8561v Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Banned??(Of course, offering reps and points to people who comment...)The card is ok, but I think ''Abstract'' can't be considered as a Sub-type... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted June 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Why not? Tell me that, and I'll change it to Rock, or something random... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 9/10 for originality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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