Wyhe Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 During my time here, I have helped many people with their fanfics. Yet, I myself never made 1 of my own. But, that's about to change... I have decided to start 1 of my own at last. Title: Yu-Gi-Oh Key of the MindPlot Write-Up: A 10 year-old orphan girl possessing a form of psychic power was once shunned from her hometown due to her immense power that brought danger to all. She was forced to grow up in secrecy thanks to her childhood friend. When she turned 18, she returned to society to continue her life where people forgot about that incident. However, she soon got herself wrapped up in a plot of world domination via mass mind control by a mysterious organisation. She now has to deal with the plot & the organisation's leader. At the same time, a cop-turned-detective vows to exterminate the psychics too. About the organisation:The Organisation is a group of psychics led by the Overmind to realise their dreams to rule the world. There are also normal people in the ranks,although they are only mind-controlled grunts or servants. Now, I need you members to give me characters. (Note; I may change several details here & there.)Character FormName: Gender: Age: Allegiance: (which side you're on)Appearance: Deck: (send me decklist by PM)Favourite Card:Trump Card: Bio: Current characters[spoiler=Good Guys]Name: Clair Kinet Gender: FemaleAge: 18Allegiance: Good guys (heroine)Appearance: redhead, green eyes, wears red blouse & black skirt & black tightsDeck: PsychicFavourite Card: Mental MasterTrump Card: Astral Plane DragonBio: She had an unique psychic ability that resulted in a prosecution which led to her being in hiding. She then grew up in her friend's family's basement where she passed time with Duel Monsters. During that period, she encountered the Duel Spirit of Mental Master whom later became her Spirit Partner. Her power is basic telepathy & telekinesis, though they can't work on the opponent during duels. Name: Penny DalesGender: FemaleAge: 18Allegiance: GoodAppearance: white blouse & dark blue jeans, blond, blue eyesDeck: LightswornFavourite Card: GragonithTrump Card: Judgment DragonBio: A childhood child of Clair. Her family had promised to protect Young Clair from the mob of angry men. She is very close to Clair & would help hr in any way. Name: Miora NemniaGender: FemaleAge: 15Allegiance: GoodAppearance: Dark blue eyes, a black belly shirt, tight leather jeans, and shiny black hair that reaches down to her butt. (Sorry about the word.)Deck: ExodiaFavourite Card: ExodiaTrump Card: ExodiaBio: ? Name: dale curtisGender: maleAge: 17Allegiance: good guyAppearance: black hair,green eyes wears blue t-shirt and blue jeans and a white capDeck: destiny hero's/warriorsFavourite Card: destiny hero - dasherTrump Card: destiny hero - dogmaBio: Dale grew up in a big family and he was never really noticed much as none of them could be singled out as a favorite but when he found out the game of duel monsters he figured out he had unique talent for it as he was unbeaten for over a year untill an unknown person destroyed him ever since he has been workin hard on improving and also looking for that duelist to have a rematch...!!! Name: Fuyuki KutsukioGender: MaleAge:16Allegiance:GoodAppearance:Blond Hair, Wears a green jacket and blue pantsDeck: D.D. DeckFavorite Card:Golden HomunculusTrump Card:Helios Trice MegistusBio:He grew up alone with no one, but, for some reason always seems happy and down to earth.He has always wondered about the Sky and Space, wondering if there are more Dimmensions out there. He spends a lot of his time daydreaming and drawing, he duels occasionally. [spoiler=Neutral]Name: Norman White (my character)Gender: MaleAge: 41Allegiance: NeutralAppearance: white trenchcoat & boots,black hair & eyesDeck: Vanilla BeatdownFavourite Card: Gene-Warped WarwolfTrump Card: Spiral SerpentBio: He was once a cop who pursued the Psychics many years ago. However, he was fired for his obbession with destroying the psychics no matter what. Currently, he is a freelance detective who vows to track down & kill off all remaining psychics. Name: Marco De'LaiGender: MaleAge: 12Allegiance: Neutral (Gets turned to Good)Appearance: Short, bright blonde hair, always wears ragged clothes. Has a robotic ArmDeck: Cyber RevolutionFavourite Card: Chimera-tech over dragonTrump Card: Chimera-tech Over DragonBio: Nearly died to the organizations. Lost his arm escaping. Has flashbacks every so often. Wants answers to find out why they took him. Acts like Axel, likes danger. Matt TuckerAge: 14Gender: MaleAlience: BadAppearence: Blond, tall, muscly with a tanDeck: Gladiator Beast Field ControlFav Card: BestiariTrump Card: GyzarusBio: Once a good duelist, after been captured and put into over a hundred underground duels he became bad. Likes to duel and then take there best cards when he wins. He has over 500 cards he has taken from opponents. Name: Kai De'LaiGender: MaleAge: 11Allegiance: NeutralAppearance: Same as Marco, only Vibrant Red hairDeck: Beatdown HereFavourite Card: United we standTrump Card: United we standBio: A younger Pro-Boxer, he is a foolish, but sometimes rewarding kid. Name: Damataeus De'LaiGender: MaleAge: 15Allegiance: NeutralAppearance: Same as Marco, only Vibrant Blue hairDeck: Burn HereFavourite Card: lava GolemTrump Card: Lava GolemBio: Marco's Older brother, he is tall for his age. Is a VERY BAD Spoilsport. Name: Dario VertzGender: MaleAge: 8Allegiance: Not sure about this, maybe a bad guy that turns into the good side (or at least that's my idea).Appearance: A little boy, with light green hair, he is always carrying a teddy bear, his normal outfit is made of old blue jeans, green sneakers, a red shirt with the letters "Yu-Gi-Oh!", and a green jacket. His hair is a little like Joey's, but in light green.Deck: Indignation of the SoulsFavourite Card: Huge RevolutionTrump Card: Guardian Angel Joan*Bio: This kid has been alone almost all his life, when he was born he was kdinnaped because the Organization discovered about his amazing psychic powers, althought he is only a kid his psychic powers are stronger than most members in the organization, he never met his mom or dad, so no one has ever show love, or something like that so he can't express any feelings, not even sadness nor happiness. This kid is manipulated by The Overmind, and not using psychic powers, but using his lack of feelings and illusions, The Overmind tells Dario that someday he will find his family if he does what he is telling to do. [spoiler=Bad guys]Name: The Overmind (my character)Gender: ? (assumed to be male) Age: (assumed to be 40+)Allegiance: Bad Guys (Leader)Appearance: a figure who's fully covered in armor with a blood red cape. The head piece is shaped like a cranium. Deck: Favourite Card: NoneTrump Card: Bio: He is the enigmatic leader of an organisation that threatens to conquer the world. He seems to be interested at Clair for a reason...His powers include pyrokinesis & mainly mind control,which can only be used on a weak-minded person or someone who lost a duel with him. Name: Blake DynnGender: MaleAge: 27Allegiance: BAD GUYAppearance: black spikey hair, light red eyes, wears a suitDeck: DARKFavourite Card: Armageddon KnightTrump Card: Rainbowdark DragonBio: A man who has suffered greatly during his lifetime. At the age of 4, his mother died. His father was murdered at the age of 6. And finally at the age of 9, his younger sister (his only remaining family member) was kiddnapped. After all this , darkness covered his heart. No good, no feelings for anyone. He then gained dark abilities as his darkness was too strong. He was very powerful, no-one dared to defy him. All he wants, is for others to feel the pain and agony he felt as a child. Which is why he joined the organasation. His main power is to inflict pain to anyone he wishes. Name:Gethin IraGender: MaleAge: 15Allegiance: OrganizationAppearance: Lightly tanned skin with a decent amount of muscle, dark blue eyes, light brown hair. He wears jeans and a plain grey shirt.Deck: Toughy... Either an original deck called "Life Deck" or any deck of your choosing.Favourite Card: if life deck, "Life Warrior"Trump Card: If Life Deck, "Life Arena".Bio: Once an honest-working boy. He began wanting to strive for greater things. He was discovered to be psychic at a young age and his parents were fine about it, they treated him well. One day, he heard about an Organization" and how they were going to rule the world. Thinking it sounded 'cool' he decided to join in. It didn't take too long for him to realize that these people were serious business and he began to doubt why he was there. He considered leaving but knew what might happen to him if he did, after all, the organization didn't want any loose ends...So he remained. He rarely used his powers, causing quite a few members to see him as 'little better then the res of the inferior trash.' He became quiet, and tried to avoid as many missions as possible. Name: Marin DefletoGender: MaleAge: 28Allegiance: (which side you're on) OrganizationAppearance: Pale Skin, black hair, wears a white tuxedo and a black shirt and black shoes and a very cool white hat with a black stripe across itDeck: (send me decklist by PM) Chaos-End SynchroFavourite Card:Chaos-End MasterTrump Card: Stardust DragonBio: A strange man who lived in a quiet country town. Growing up he was isolated from the other children because of his strange powers. But one day he just snapped and blew up every glass object in the neighbourhood, then he ran away from the town and never returned. His twisted mind became more and more evil and finally he came across the organization and joined it to take over the world. His Dark Powers are a little less then the overmind but not much less. But his loyalty to the overmind keeps him from trying to overthrow him. No one dares to oppose him because everyone that has, has been Mind Crushed. But his main power is Manipulation of Shadows. He can create illusion to trick his enemies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 bump...come on people!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 I'll help you out. My deck list has been sent to you via PM. Name: Miora NemniaGender: FemaleAge: 15Allegiance: GoodAppearance: Dark blue eyes, a black belly shirt, tight leather jeans, and shiny black hair that reaches down to her butt. (Sorry about the word.)Deck: Exodia, Arise.Favourite Card: Exodia the Forbidden OneTrump Cards: All five peices of Exodia.Bio: ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 I got the pm WYHE. Its my turn to help you. Name: Blake DynnGender: MaleAge: 27Allegiance: BAD GUYAppearance: black spikey hair, light red eyes, wears a suitDeck: DARKFavourite Card: ??? (Is it ok if you do the deck)Trump Card: ???Bio: A man who has suffered greatly during his lifetime. At the age of 4, his mother died. His father was murdered at the age of 6. And finally at the age of 9, his younger sister (his only remaining family member) was kiddnapped. After all this , darkness covered his heart. No good, no feelings for anyone. He then gained dark abilities as his darkness was too strong. He was very powerful, no-one dared to defy him. All he wants, is for others to feel the pain and agony he felt as a child. Which is why he joined the organisation. Hope you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Fine by me then & he's accepted. I've elaborated on the organisation & so,what kind of dark power Blake has. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Ok thanks, good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Ill help out Name: Marco De'LaiGender: MaleAge: 12Allegiance: Neutral (Gets turned to Good)Appearance: Short, bright blonde hair, always wears ragged clothes. Has a robotic ArmDeck: Cyber revolution[spoiler=Combo. You make the rest]Use Future Fusion, send EVERY Machine type monster in deck ti grave to select Chimera Tech. Use overload Fusion to bring him out with max. 24800 ATK < Favourite Card: Chimera-tech over dragonTrump Card: Chimera-tech Over DragonBio: Nearly died to teh organizations. Lost his arm escaping. Has flashbacks every so often. Wants answers to find out why they took him. Acts like Axel, lieks danger. IS THAT ENOUGH? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Accepted Marco as character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 So, how many characters do we need before you start this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 most probably at least 4 good guys,3 main bad guys & 2-3 neutrals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 So, at least two more good guys and another bad guy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Impact™ Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Matt TuckerAge: 14Gender: MaleAlience: BadAppearence: Blond, tall, muscly with a tanDeck: Gladiator Beast Field ControlFav Card: BestiariTrump Card: GyzarusBio: Once a good duelist, after been captured and put into over a hundred underground duels he became bad. Likes to duel and then take there best cards when he wins. He has over 500 cards he has taken from opponents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Matt TuckerAge: 14Gender: MaleAlience: BadAppearence: Blond' date=' tall, muscly with a tanDeck: Gladiator Beast Field ControlFav Card: BestiariTrump Card: GyzarusBio: Once a good duelist, after been captured and put into over a hundred underground duels he became bad. Likes to duel and then take there best cards when he wins. He has over 500 cards he has taken from opponents.[/quote']Accepted,but he'll be a neutral turned-evil via mind control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Name:Gethin IraGender: MaleAge: 15Allegiance: OrganizationAppearance: Lightly tanned skin with a decent amount of muscle, dark blue eyes, light brown hair. He wears jeans and a plain grey shirt.Deck: Toughy... Either an original deck called "Life Deck" or any deck of your choosing.Favourite Card: if life deck, "Life Warrior"Trump Card: If Life Deck, "Life Arena".Bio: Once an honest-working boy. He began wanting to strive for greater things. He was discovered to be psychic at a young age and his parents were fine about it, they treated him well. One day, he heard about an Organization" and how they were going to rule the world. Thinking it sounded 'cool' he decided to join in. It didn't take too long for him to realize that these people were serious business and he began to doubt why he was there. He considered leaving but knew what might happen to him if he did, after all, the organization didn't want any loose ends...So he remained. He rarely used his powers, causing quite a few members to see him as 'little better then the res of the inferior trash.' He became quiet, and tried to avoid as many missions as possible. So, all-in-all, this guy could betray evil and go good or neutral, doesn't take too much of a change to his bio. Oh, and if you want to add cards to the life deck, go ahead, it isn't quite complete anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 QUESTION: Are synchros allowed plz answer if they are then here's the full bio if they're not i'll change the deck If you still need a main bad guy then here's my evil dude Name: Marin DefletoGender: MaleAge: 28Allegiance: (which side you're on) OrganizationAppearance: Pale Skin, black hair, wears a white tuxedo and a black shirt and black shoes and a very cool white hat with a black stripe across itDeck: (send me decklist by PM) Chaos-End SynchroFavourite Card:Chaos-End MasterTrump Card: Stardust DragonBio: A strange man who lived in a quiet country town. Growing up he was isolated from the other children because of his strange powers. But one day he just snapped and blew up every glass object in the neighbourhood, then he ran away from the town and never returned. His twisted mind became more and more evil and finally he came across the organization and joined it to take over the world. His Dark Powers are a little less then the overmind but not much less. But his loyalty to the overmind keeps him from trying to overthrow him. No one dares to oppose him because everyone that has, has been Mind Crushed. But his main power is Manipulation of Shadows. He can create illusion to trick his enemies. it would be awesome if he was one of the main evil characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Darn, another bad guy. What Raviel Priest WYHE needs right now are at least two more good guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 most probably at least 4 good guys' date='3 [i']main[/i] bad guys & 2-3 neutrals. What do you mean by neutrals? Just some random guy on the street? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Neutrals are main people in the story but aren't on either side. They might help out the good or the bad guys. Or, they might just come in and wipe the floor with all of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Oh, I see. If you want me to give you a Neutral then I will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 ill make another neut. Name: Kai De'LaiGender: MaleAge: 11Allegiance: NeutralAppearance: Same as Marco, only Vibrant Red hairDeck: Beatdown Here Favourite Card: United we standTrump Card: United we standBio: A younger Pro-Boxer, he is a foolish, but sometimes rewarding kid. Name: Damataeus De'LaiGender: MaleAge: 15 Allegiance: NeutralAppearance: Same as Marco, only Vibrant Blue hairDeck: Burn HereFavourite Card: lava GolemTrump Card: Lava GolemBio: Marco's Older brother, he is tall for his age. Is a VERY BAD Spoilsport. Now can we start? LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 I'm pretty sure he's going to accept your characters. But, in all honesty, he needs more good characters. And, Raviel Priest WYHE, please do not think I'm trying to take over this fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lalolalo Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Ok, I'm gonna make a character. XD Everyone needs helps with characters. XD So here is mine, I think mine is gonna be a bad guy that will beome a good guy, or something like that you can change that. Name: Dario VertzGender: MaleAge: 8Allegiance: Not sure about this, maybe a bad guy that turns into the good side (or at least that's my idea).Appearance: A little boy, with light green hair, he is always carrying a teddy bear, his normal outfit is made of old blue jeans, green sneakers, a red shirt with the letters "Yu-Gi-Oh!", and a green jacket. His hair is a little like Joey's, but in light green.Deck: Indignation of the SoulsFavourite Card: Huge RevolutionTrump Card: Guardian Angel Joan*Bio: This kid has been alone almost all his life, when he was born he was kdinnaped because the Organization discovered about his amazing psychic powers, althought he is only a kid his psychic powers are stronger than most members in the organization, he never met his mom or dad, so no one has ever show love, or something like that so he can't express any feelings, not even sadness nor happiness. This kid is manipulated by The Overmind, and not using psychic powers, but using his lack of feelings and illusions, The Overmind tells Dario that someday he will find his family if he does what he is telling to do. I'm thinking into making him a good guy after Clair Kintet shows him love, freindship, or something like that, well that's my idea, obv. you can make some changes... XD. I'll PM you the deck later, ok? *Can I use my own cards? If yes then Guardian Angel Joan is not the Trump Card, I'll make one just for him. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 i will be a good guy...!!! Name: dale curtisGender: maleAge: 17Allegiance: good guyAppearance: black hair,green eyes wears blue t-shirt and blue jeans and a white capDeck: destiny hero's/warriorsFavourite Card: destiny hero - dasherTrump Card: destiny hero - dogmaBio: Dale grew up in a big family and he was never really noticed much as none of them could be singled out as a favorite but when he found out the game of duel monsters he figured out he had unique talent for it as he was unbeaten for over a year untill an unknown person destroyed him ever since he has been workin hard on improving and also looking for that duelist to have a rematch...!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 lalolalo: You can use your cards too. Thanks for all your characters guys. I may changed their life details to fit the story better.I think that the main guys are almost coming together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neiko Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Character FormName: Fuyuki KutsukioGender: MaleAge:16Allegiance:GoodAppearance:Blond Hair, Wears a green jacket and blue pantsDeck: D.D. DeckFavorite Card:Golden HomunculusTrump Card:Helios Trice Megistus Bio:He grew up alone with no one, but, for some reason always seems happy and down to earth. He has always wondered about the Sky and Space, wondering if there are more Dimmensions out there. He spends a lot of his time daydreaming and drawing, he duels occasionally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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