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Fiend of the Unforgiving Desert ~ Hunter's New Card!


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My last card failed. It had holo issues, and the effect was meh..

 

People did not like it, especially Silenceleader. This time, I hope my card DOES NOT get a 5/10.

 

I dont own the artwork for this card.

 

This is like som of my other new cards. The Entire idea, of what I know so far, comes from my good friend Ruby. :P

 

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Thanks to Simplicity Ninja for the holo.

 

Feel free to Rate and Critique.

 

EDIT: This card is an EPIC FAIL, it got a 5.4 sorry to waste everyone's time.[/align]

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Now, this is what I call uniqueness!

 

Let's first start on the Picture, Name and Effect resemblance:

 

Fiend of the Unforgiving Desert; Nice name, suits the picture very well, but I'm not sure about the effect. The effect is more "forgiving" than unforgiving. But it's up to you to change the name.

 

Picture; That is one nice picture my friend! Especially the holo effects from Simplicity Ninja, really finishes up the effect.

 

Effect; This Effect doesn't really suit the name, but it does the picture for some strange weird. The picture seems "paracitical" making it suit the effect very well, but not the name. But possibly I could be wrong, I just don't feel a vibe.

 

Next onto Effects:

 

Effect; Now, this is the most important part of the card. Making it unique and strange, but also VERY helpful is what makes the best effect. This card has all of those 3 things. This means that the effect is PERFECT in my eyes, I would use it, it doesn't give too much of an advantage, nor too little. It is just good the way it is. Very unique, this could quite possibly be on a future TCG card, it is that well done.

 

OCG; Very nice OCG, I couldn't spot anything wrong. The OCG flows meaning that you don't have to stop and re-look over it. Also I could tell that you and others (if so), made this effect look the part and most definately act it.

 

Lastly, Balance:

 

Balance; Now, this is the most important thing. Cards which are underpowered are easier to fix than overpowered, but this effect sits directly on the line between underpowered and overpowered. It is great! I haven't seen a card with such good balance in a long time. Very well done on that behalf.

 

ATK & DEF, Type and Attribute; This is also needs to be chosen wisely, since this card has a good effect, but making it OP would be a problem. I cannot see any problems with the ATK & DEF of this card.

 

 

So that's everything really. I can see that A LOT of effort went into this card. "Silenceleader" really gave you a low rate for no appropriate reason. A rating should be based on your Card-making Level and on how well you did the card. This ENTIRE card shows how a card SHOULD be made.

 

Overall, 10/10, Perfect. Name shouldn't deduct points so therefore you score a perfect 10. Keep up the good work.

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