Baphometh Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 :D well, this is my first card, I hope you like it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 A bit overpowered with some strategyAnyway...-The pic....not my choice for good...but suits it I guess.-The effect...again...overpowered.-The general card. A nifty 3.1/10 (I got nicer in rating) -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 over pwrd loved the other parts of card and great idea so 6.934/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 I will list the things I noticed in order.I. After this line, "When you Summon this card" you need a comma.II. It's a Special Summon when you fulfill the requirement, which in this case, by paying 1000 Life Points.III. Deck needs to be capitalized.IV. "Two" should be in its numerical form, "2." Also, you do realize that you need to have exactly TWO Dark Magicians in your hand or Deck for this to work, right? Unless you state otherwise, e.g. "up to 2 'Dark Magician'..." Notice that I removed the -s after "Dark Magicians." There's no such thing as a "Dark Magicians" Card. That's all I see, the rest is up to you and the community. ;)EDIT: One less thing to fix. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 V. Field needs to be capitalized. this is horrible wrong, field is not capitalized just check judgment dragon if you want proof anyhoo okay card 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Overpowered considering that the card that summons DM's from your deck is at the cost of 1/2 lp lol.... Nice try though ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 please use img codes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skylarman1 Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 way overpowered. 1000 LP 2 summon 2 dark magician? pretty overpowered. but since its a first card it doesnt matter that much...also use the codes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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