RickiMinaj Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 A rhyming Love Poem. I like to post poetry mainly of love sadness and naturebut sadness is my favorite! [align=center]Thinking in the darkness doesn't really helpIf you truly love someone, Give them a yelpYou'll see the difference when u speak your heartSweat, Sour, Evil or Darkletting out Your Feelings feels very oddBut don't sit there just like a sodGet up, get out, put your heart on the lineTill someone comes and grasps the vineUntil he falls in love with youor until he makes you feel Dark BlueBut in my point of view, i have to saythe guys that were real aren't here today[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Lol im gonna say this is great :P ^_^ Absolutely adore it lol. I havent heard a poem like this for awhile so ya :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 Pretty good. Though, Like I said over MSN, the rhyming seems a little forced. Despite that, though, it's still very nice ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephkaaa Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 I really like ur poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted June 28, 2008 Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 I love your poems even more than cinnamon rolls!!!!!!!!Excellent job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted June 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2008 thnx alotIt's no bigiie, i just right what comes to heart ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelioSpark Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 rhyming seems a little forced, like Browarod saidI really like it overall though^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Of The Heart Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 This Poem Is Great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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