Raiken Kisuki Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 My First Card, I just joined today. Dark Vortex Dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 okay card but here's how the effect should look like This card cannot be Special Summoned. Once per turn, pay 500 LP to add 1 card in your Graveyard to your hand. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300 for every DARK monster in your opponent's hand and field. And since i'm in such a good mood here's 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiken Kisuki Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 thanks for the rating! And thank you for the suggestions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Seems overpowered... My Rating: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiken Kisuki Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 oh i see, thanks though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkpkm Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Little overpowered, but good.....6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiken Kisuki Posted June 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 thanks dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltscolts18 Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 i like it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cameronsdog Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 for a first card thats real good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 Ok You Need Some Experienced Rtings.Pic Is Good Get Rid Of The Border, Yet It Does Give It A 3-d Effect.Effect Is Ok You Are New So I Dont Blame You.Skulder Fixed IT.Overall, I Say...6/10Average. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 29, 2008 Report Share Posted June 29, 2008 ocg needs to improve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 OCG ius way offand pic is good except for the white border PM me if you need any help ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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