leafronzo Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desu the Blue Nerd Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Cool 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 pic i've seen b4, but nice effect otherwise ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Your OCG is off, and the pic is EXTREMELY overused. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafronzo Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogg-Saron Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Capitalize Special Summon, it is Fiend-Type not Fiend type, put spaces after periods, Field is capitalized, it is face-up, and change Attack to ATK.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 OCG mistakes, but other than that, nice :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 i agree with the above posts.. ps: girls gone wild?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty Shovel Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 I agree With MCII and also, Why In The World did you write "Girls Gone Wild"????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donquixote Doflamingo Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 search me :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOREAN2 Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 WTH???!!!!! i wanted boobs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 KOREAN2, watch yourself. the mods will ban you just as fast as the last account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Capitalize Special Summon' date=' it is Fiend-Type not Fiend type, put spaces after periods, Field is capitalized, it is face-up, and change Attack to ATK.4/10[/quote'] Great analysis, except that field isn't always capitalized.Add in 500 "points", face-up on the field, Tributing, your side of the field, non-Fiend and you're pretty much done. OCG: 15% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOREAN2 Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 in the OCG thread it says dont use "points" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 But I say: use them :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Meh, I say all yo fixes are lack luster an' inadequate. True fix: This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. All non-Fiend-Type monsters lose 500 ATK. Now tha's what I call true fix. Field ain't cap'd dammit. It's only cap'd in Field Spell Card or Field Spell Card Zone. Don't say points dammit. Good job KOREAN2 for usin' the OCG thread, y'all should too. Your side of the field=you control. Decrease and increase are old-school now, all they use nowadays are lose n' gain. Haven't y'all bought any LODT boosters? leafronzo: People are supposed to be able to Normal Summon and Set this, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leafronzo Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Meh' date=' I say all yo fixes are lack luster an' inadequate. True fix: [b']This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. All non-Fiend-Type monsters lose 500 ATK.[/b] Now tha's what I call true fix. Field ain't cap'd dammit. It's only cap'd in Field Spell Card or Field Spell Card Zone. Don't say points dammit. Good job KOREAN2 for usin' the OCG thread, y'all should too. Your side of the field=you control. Decrease and increase are old-school now, all they use nowadays are lose n' gain. Haven't y'all bought any LODT boosters? leafronzo: People are supposed to be able to Normal Summon and Set this, right?nope Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Originality: 2%. Originality-wise, this card is a somewhat common substance called "pure essence of FAIL." OCG: The Correct OCG is This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control to the Graveyard. While this card remains face-up on the field, all face-up Fiend-Type monsters gain 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Meh' date=' I say all yo fixes are lack luster an' inadequate. True fix: [b']This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. All non-Fiend-Type monsters lose 500 ATK.[/b] Now tha's what I call true fix. Field ain't cap'd dammit. It's only cap'd in Field Spell Card or Field Spell Card Zone. Don't say points dammit. Good job KOREAN2 for usin' the OCG thread, y'all should too. Your side of the field=you control. Decrease and increase are old-school now, all they use nowadays are lose n' gain. Haven't y'all bought any LODT boosters? leafronzo: People are supposed to be able to Normal Summon and Set this, right? Don't say dammit against someone with over the four times the posts you have, dammit.When I say you may say points, then you may say points dammit. :\ EDIT: Supreme, note how decreasing the ATK of everyoene around you is entirely different from increasing yours with 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 You don't say points. Point proven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 This card is weak-sauce.A triple tribute of a single type of monster just to get a really weak effect off that doesn't even work on face-down monsters?I'm sorry, but...I can't offer any advice on how to make this better...3.4/10 BTW, visit the OCG thread in my signature. Your OCG needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Meh' date=' I say all yo fixes are lack luster an' inadequate. True fix: [b']This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. All non-Fiend-Type monsters lose 500 ATK.[/b] Now tha's what I call true fix. Field ain't cap'd dammit. It's only cap'd in Field Spell Card or Field Spell Card Zone. Don't say points dammit. Good job KOREAN2 for usin' the OCG thread, y'all should too. Your side of the field=you control. Decrease and increase are old-school now, all they use nowadays are lose n' gain. Haven't y'all bought any LODT boosters? leafronzo: People are supposed to be able to Normal Summon and Set this, right?nope Ok, the way you worded it the reader has no way of knowing this, leading to ruling confusion, so in that case, the OCG should be: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 Fiend-Type monsters you control. All non-Fiend-Type monsters lose 500 ATK. Supreme Gamesmaster: Sending monsters from the field to the Graveyard is Tributing. OldMaster: Posts have little relation to how much you know about OCG. Lolpostcount. The only time you ever say points is in Life Points, dammit. Post a pic of a single card in the whole TCG that breaks this rule. You can't. - Dont say Points - after an ATK or DEF alter' date=' do not say points.[/quote']DJ has a helluvalot more posts than you, so by your own logic, don't say points, dammit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Okay, so to the above, I'm not defending OldMaster, but... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonRoyale Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Reprints keep up with the OCG. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Chill down, Wraith. Posts have indeed little relations to the Official Card Grammar, but they decide rank ;)If cards are old OCG'ed, they are errated. If they ain't errated then it's FINE. :\ I've seen you editing your post three times. Does this conversation make you not feeling right?You said "points" yourself three times in your last post only :P So stop complainin'. btw, since you removed that about Pharaoh's Servant.... :P Basically, OCG can't be perfect because nobody exactly knows what the perfect OCG is. Tell you what, the reason that they don't print "points" anymore is because of cards getting long effects, so basically a trick making them shorter. So, use both. In my opinion, points should be used to fill some emptyness in a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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