finn1223 Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hans Henrik Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 first of all, since its an effect monster, the "(dragon of darkness)- " should be removed second, i think it should say "is summoned" instead of "comes into play" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Don't make it a fusion monster unless you have two fusion material monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Thats not a fusion! OCG needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zain_reddevil Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 ocg=badmy result=5/10 (mostly for effort) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linkpkm Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 It´s a fusion. Work on OCG....But a good start ;) 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finn1223 Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 thank you i tried im workin on ocg now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cassia Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 If you want this card to be a fusion, then show what cards are needed to make this card. OCG also needs work. But, it's a good start for a first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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