GregarFalzar Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 My first attempt of a realistic card failed and therefore is going to be moved, so i tried a second card, i do NOT own the image as it was contributed by Deviant Art (Sorry, i dont got the user name, so if you own the image or you know who this image is please tell me) and the effect is complex, but usefull Positive and Negative feedback are appraised Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zain_reddevil Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 a bit confusing....4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 very confusing, could you tell me in words what you wanted it to do? if you wanted it to shuffle your deck and discard cards off the top of it equal to the amount of cards you would have discarded to negate the ability of the card discarding them, that would have been easier to write... i dont understand what you meant when you wrote: "shuffle the same number of cards in your deck, shuffle your deck..." that sentence doesnt make any sense to me... until this is addressed, i must agree with the above and rate a 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GregarFalzar Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Ok, sorry for the effect being so complex, ill give a list of what happens if this card would exist and trigger, in order 1.Your oponent activates an effect that discards 1 card from your hand (Lets say Spirit Reaper)2.This card activates3.You choose a card in your hand and send it to your deck4.You shuffle5.You send the top card from your dek to the graveyard (Spirit Reaper discards 1 card)6.Spirit Reaper is negated and destroyed7.You draw 1 card Now it is kind of explicit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 okay, that makes more sense now... but then you should add in "shuffle cards from your hand to your deck equal to the amount of cards you would have discarded by that effect" that would fix the sentence i was talking about in my above post. ^_^ it would also make it more clear. *i reserve the right to say that that sentence may not be entirely OCG correct. Others may fix/criticize my sentence at will, and you may completely disregard by correction entirely. adding this sentence to your card may enhance the cards ability to be read clearly, and may allow people to actually understand the meaning. WARNING: not adding this sentence may get you more and more low scores. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GregarFalzar Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Thanks for that, but i really dont care much about the scores, even though, i will fix the text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 okay, so you could read the fine print disclaimer? XD :lol: i knew you would be able to... a poor attempt at humor... i think you have a good idea for a card though, a card like this hasnt been made yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 the pic is amaazing, but there is minor OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GregarFalzar Posted June 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 Thanks both of you, the Text has been succesfully edited, but i think there are still some OCG errors, and yes, i read the text in minor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted June 30, 2008 Report Share Posted June 30, 2008 ocg,, little,,, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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