Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx Tommers, like 2 more comments and i shall post the next Segment ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:pyramid:. Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 kwl fanfic, you may want to think of them beong abit longer, but yer their good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 I dont need to think on it, its in segments for various reasons explained on post 1 and on the comments ^_^ and thanx ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokyo Duel Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 four words: worlds greatest fan fic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx lol Well it gets better ^_^   SEGMENT 2 NOW UP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Segment two was good Dj. I'll be sure to enter your contest. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Another great job, Osiris. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thanx Guys ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 You get a rep for making a great fan-fic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Thank you very much ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Cool, I'll keep my eye on this. ~ Atomix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Litch Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 ....didn't get along with syncro and tuner but it was a really interesting duel....anyway that Nigel pal said "Insect imitation: This Spell Card allows me to Release 1 Insect-Type monster I control to Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster from my Deck that is 1 Level higher than that of the Released monster"....but I think Insect Imitation can be activated by offering any type of monster in the owner's field (not only insects) to special summon 1 level higher insect mon.Keep it up Dj Osiris, this fan fic rules man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 impressive second segment. ^_^Â And your holding a contest? I did the same thing and got a good turn out, I hope you will get a good turn out as well. Â This is an interesting fan fic for sure.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast user J Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 Yah! Segment 2 is sweet.:D I love the Syncro monsters, but I think that "release" should be "tribute". Other than that it's amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 ....didn't get along with syncro and tuner but it was a really interesting duel....anyway that Nigel pal said "Insect imitation: This Spell Card allows me to Release 1 Insect-Type monster I control to Special Summon 1 Insect-Type monster from my Deck that is 1 Level higher than that of the Released monster"....but I think Insect Imitation can be activated by offering any type of monster in the owner's field (not only insects) to special summon 1 level higher insect mon.Keep it up Dj Osiris' date=' this fan fic rules man.[/quote'] To understand Synchro's you need to have read info on 5D'S / Seen the episodes. Bold - Indeed it does, but i worded it as the only monsters in Nigel's deck were Insect monsters, so that is why he said so.   Thanx Atomix ^_^ Thanx Kale, im holding it most likly next week. Thanx Crystal Beast User J, and no, 'Release' is the new OCG of the word Tribute, read about 5D'S / see the episodes to understand new OCG changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Great segment Dj I like the duel. I'll sure enter you contest :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Thank You ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 No problem :D. And tell me when the contest is up :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 I shall be thinking over it tonight, i may give a massive first prize consisting of like 10,000 points :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dangweasle Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Very interesting. You express the charachters thoughts very thoroughly. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 This is very interesting, but I haven't really been hooked to it Although, time might change my mind ^_^ keep this updated, and i will be a screaming fan, like all the others XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oskar10 Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Hi Dj Osiris i sins it was a prety god fan-fic you has inspired me to make one thank you. :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Of The Abyss Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Osiris, I want to join the contest, but I'm away till Saturday. Can it be next week? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Even though I pride myself on my memory, I can never remember all of the card effects. Why don't you simply hyperlink the card names to the YGO wiki the first time they appear in the fic? It'd be a lot easier for us readers, and you won't need to make the Japanese cards into English, as well. About the story itself, the pacing makes it feel like a TV episode. (not that it's bad or anything...) I hope you continue with this fic, 9/10. PS: I plan on entering your contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mutant Monster RAEG-HAPYP Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 :shock: :shock: It's too good for me to rate:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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