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tryin hard but not workin out...


finn1223

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good card. just get rid of "you" and replace it with a comma

9/10

 

ps. if ever your dogged by a senior member, dont take it personal =) its wat they do. its happened to all of us, especially me. but just remember what they say, make adjustments and youl get better. Just have a good attitude about it or theyl dog you for that too

 

no worries... be happy!

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Why would anyone be mad? If you don't mess up, how would you learn to become better? I can't name anyone in this site who's OCG is PERFECT; can you? Anyway, I love the picture but you need to work on your card naming skills and OCG. If I remember correctly, being destroyed by a monster doesn't necessarily mean the same thing as being destroyed in battle, so you should be more specific (unless that's what you wanted and I'm just being paranoid).

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Why would anyone be mad? If you don't mess up' date=' how would you learn to become better? I can't name anyone in this site who's OCG is PERFECT; can you? Anyway, I love the picture but you need to work on your card naming skills and OCG. If I remember correctly, being [b']destroyed[/b] by a monster doesn't necessarily mean the same thing as being destroyed in battle, so you should be more specific (unless that's what you wanted and I'm just being paranoid).

 

DJ Osiris ^_^

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Why would anyone be mad? If you don't mess up' date=' how would you learn to become better? I can't name anyone in this site who's OCG is PERFECT; can you? Anyway, I love the picture but you need to work on your card naming skills and OCG. If I remember correctly, being [b']destroyed[/b] by a monster doesn't necessarily mean the same thing as being destroyed in battle, so you should be more specific (unless that's what you wanted and I'm just being paranoid).

 

DJ Osiris ^_^

Besides HIM! You get my point. >_<

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Name is ok.

Pic is pretty good, but BTW you do not have a disclaimer or credit...

OCG:

"When this card is destroyed as a result of battle involving a DARK or WATER Monster you may draw 2 cards."

 

I think anyway i dont make many cards anymore...

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