Ean98 Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 This are my newest cards see it and rate it plz [/spoiler/]This is why i chose moon for the second card because a spirit of a warrior is never forgeten like a moon.[/spoiler/] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 im sorry, but really bad.. i gotta give you a 3/10but to do a spoiler u gotta do somethin like this: [*spoiler=title]txt inside it just take out the * and it should look like this[spoiler=title]txt inside it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 1, 2008 Report Share Posted July 1, 2008 [spoiler=Comments ^_^][spoiler=The Mecha Warrior]take out the description of the Mecha Warrior. It doesnt belong on an effect monster. The name, it kinda needs to be a little more unique. As for the effect: "Once per turn you can skip your Draw Phase. If you do, this card gains 500 ATK or DEF" somethin like that. and the pic, kinda seems overused [spoiler=The Soul of the Warrior]the effect should be more like: "Pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Warrior monster from your deck" [spoiler=the Golden Sword]First, the name needs to be a little more uniqueSecond, the effect should say more along the lines of: "This monster can only be equipped to a Warrior-Type monster. The ATK of that card is increased by 1000." [spoiler=sorry =(]i really dont wanna be this harsh but it is to make you better ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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