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Hunter's Best Card. Average Rating is 9.6!


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6 pages for 1 card!? This qualifies for a contest style rate.

 

Your Effect:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up, neither player can Advance Summon. During your Standby Phase, you must discard a card from your hand, if you cannot, this card is destroyed. As long as this card remains face-up, the field is treated as "Forest"; all Beast, Beast-Warrior, Insect, and Plant-Type monsters gain 200 ATK. You can remove from play 4 EARTH monsters from your Graveyard to select 1 unoccupied Monster Card Zone on your opponent's side of the field, the selected Card Zone cannot be used.

 

OCG fix:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, neither player can Advance Summon. During each of your Standby Phases, you must discard 1 card, if you cannot, this card is destroyed. This card is treated as "Forest". All Beast-Type, Beast-Warrior-Type, Insect-Type, and Plant-Type monsters gain 200 ATK. You can remove from play 4 EARTH monsters from your Graveyard to select 1 of your opponent's unoccupied Monster Card Zones. The designated Monster Card Zone cannot be used during this Duel.

 

Errors:

 

-on the field is needed after as long as this card remains face-up.

-During each of your Standby Phases instead of during your Standby Phase is needed to show that it happens during each of your Standby Phases and not just in 1 Standby Phase.

-a=1

-from your hand is not used. Discard is always from the hand.

-As long as this card remains face-up is not needed here.

-The field is treated as Forest? No. Never. Ever. This card is treated as Forest, and monsters can be treated as Field Spell Cards, check Maiden of the Aqua for proof.

-Semi-Colons aren't used, a period is what is needed in its place.

-Type must be used after each type listed. If it isn't, the card in which it isn't is outdated, such is the case with Forest, Mountain, etc. Check The A. Forces and other such cards as proof.

-Check Icicle Sacrifice for proof of the OCG on the last effect.

 

OCG: 11/20

 

Name: Meh, a little plain, but it works. 4.5/5

 

Picture: The forest in the background is too blurred, and the holoing effect's opacity is too strong, it overpowers the background. 13/15

Balance: 3250 ATK due to it's effect combined with the zone nullification effect and Advance Summon stopper is a little overcooked for a 2-trib monster. 15/20

 

Effect Quality: You put a good amount of thought into it, although it's far from the peak of length and complexity. Just a bunch of effects run together, not conjoined or unified. 16/20

 

Originality: Effects reminiscent of Fog King, Forest, and Icicle Sacrifice to some degree. 6.5/10

 

Little Things: Don't give image credit in circulation, it should go in your post, not in your circulation, image credit in circulation is unrealistic.

6/10

 

11+4.5+13+15+16+6.5+6=72/100 72% 7.2/10

 

Not your best card. Not too bad either though, I've never given higher than 90% on my contest style rates, so 72% is decent. I know you can do better though. Take this rating into consideration next time you make a card.

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