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im still tryin to get the ocg right rate plzzz.

 

 

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Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, by paying 600 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly this turn. During each of your End Phases of a turn its effect is not actived add a Counter to this card. Remove all Counters from this card each time its effect is actived. If there are 3 or more Counters on this card your opponent can pay 600 Life Points during their Main Phase 1 and select one of their monsters, the selected monster can attack your Life Points directly this turn.

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Here you go.

 

You can pay 600 Life Points for this monster to attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If you do not use this effect in 3 turns your opponent can pay 600 Life Points, and one of his/her monsters can attack your Life Points directly.

 

I think that's what you meant. I'm not sure if life points is capped or not...

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how about:

If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns' date=' your opponent may select one of [s']his/her[/s] their monsters. If so, he/she they may pay 600 Life Points, the selected monster may attack your life points directly.

 

This isn't MTG.

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how about:

If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns' date=' your opponent may select one of his/her monsters. If so, he/she may pay 600 Life Points, the selected monster may attack directly

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You may pay 600 Life Points for this monster to attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns, your opponent may pay 600 Life Points and select one of their monsters to attack your Life Points directly.

 

I think that's pretty "spot-on".

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how about:

If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns' date=' your opponent may select one of [s']his/her[/s] their monsters. If so, he/she they may pay 600 Life Points, the selected monster may attack your life points directly.

 

This isn't MTG.

 

Life Points is supposed to be capped.

 

ps. whats MTG??

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how about:

If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns' date=' your opponent may select one of [s']his/her[/s] their monsters. If so, he/she they may pay 600 Life Points, the selected monster may attack your life points directly.

 

This isn't MTG.

 

Life Points is supposed to be capped.

 

ps. whats MTG??

 

 

MTG = Magic the Gathering

 

Yu-Gi-Oh opponent = they/their

MTG opponent = he/she or his/her

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You may pay 600 Life Points for this monster to attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns, your opponent may pay 600 Life Points and select one of their monsters to attack your Life Points directly.

 

 

I think its perfect now.

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You may pay 600 Life Points for this monster to attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If this card's effect is not activated within 3 turns, your opponent may pay 600 Life Points and select one of their monsters to attack your Life Points directly.

 

COPY THIS DIRECTLY TO YOUR CARD.

Your OCG in the first sentence is way off.

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Yu-Gi-Oh opponent = they/their

MTG opponent = he/she or his/her

Are you saying that girls do not play this game? Anyway, I think the correct way to say this is: "By paying 600 Life Points, this card can attack your opponent directly. If you do not activate this effect within 3 turns after this card was Summoned, your opponent (during his/her next turn) can pay 600 Life Points to attack directly with a monster he/she controls."

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