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Drakuma the Destroyer - This would make more sense as an Effect Monster.

Flame of the Destroyer - WAY too overpowering. Tone it down to about 100 per monster.

Shima the Defender - Again, would make more sense as an Effect Monster.

Defender's Energy - This card has potential. Good stall card. (*)

Mutant Dinosaur - Little overpowering for a Level 5 monster.

Robotic Alien Dog - Needs to be an effect monster and OCG needs work.

Metal Defender - Too much DEF without a drawback. Needs work.

Sword Master - Basic Vanilla monster. Stats are same as X-Head Cannon (MFC)(*)

Flaming Blaze - Good Equip Card. (*)

White Demon - Good, but powerful Vanilla monster. (*)

White Katana - Too overpowering.

Energy Blast - Similar to Radiant Mirror Force (FOTB)

 

Four of your cards [the ones I marked with the (*)] are the ones that don't need much or any improvement - the "realistic" ones you're asking about. All the others are either too overpowering or need to be changed to Effect Monsters. The images were amazing; you have good taste. You need a little work on your OCG. (There are people that will nail you for improper OCG.)

 

If I were to rate these cards, I would give a 4/10. You have good ideas, but you need to hone your skills. You have potential. I look forward to seeing what you can do.

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Drakuma the Destroyer - This would make more sense as an Effect Monster.

Flame of the Destroyer - WAY too overpowering. Tone it down to about 100 per monster.

Shima the Defender - Again' date=' would make more sense as an Effect Monster.

Defender's Energy - This card has potential. Good stall card. (*)

Mutant Dinosaur - Little overpowering for a Level 5 monster.

Robotic Alien Dog - Needs to be an effect monster and OCG needs work.

Metal Defender - Too much DEF without a drawback. Needs work.

Sword Master - Basic Vanilla monster. Stats are same as X-Head Cannon (MFC)(*)

Flaming Blaze - Good Equip Card. (*)

White Demon - Good, but powerful Vanilla monster. (*)

White Katana - Too overpowering.

Energy Blast - Similar to Radiant Mirror Force (FOTB)

 

Four of your cards [the ones I marked with the (*)'] are the ones that don't need much or any improvement - the "realistic" ones you're asking about. All the others are either too overpowering or need to be changed to Effect Monsters. The images were amazing; you have good taste. You need a little work on your OCG. (There are people that will nail you for improper OCG.)

 

If I were to rate these cards, I would give a 4/10. You have good ideas, but you need to hone your skills. You have potential. I look forward to seeing what you can do.

 

thanks for the feedback, but i'm kind of new to this...so...

 

OCG?

 

Also, I don't have much experience with actual cards. All I know about effect monsters is flip effects, but i'll see what I can do about Drakuma and Shima.

 

As for the rest, i'll make the necessary adjustments to make them more realistic.

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Have you ever played Yu-Gi-Oh before?

 

I have tried' date=' I watched the entire series and unless memory fails me a friend let me use his deck to duel one of his other decks...and I have played a few of the games.

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Uhm... not quite sure why your here then but, to each his own.

effect monster, spell, and tap cards dont have descriptions before their effect. They just have an effect.

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Have you ever played Yu-Gi-Oh before?

 

I have tried' date=' I watched the entire series and unless memory fails me a friend let me use his deck to duel one of his other decks...and I have played a few of the games.

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Uhm... not quite sure why your here then but, to each his own.

effect monster, spell, and tap cards dont have descriptions before their effect. They just have an effect.

 

Oh I know that, like Man-eater bug...when he's flipped he destroys one monster, but it doesn't say that on the card.

 

as for spells and Traps...my personal opinion is that doesn't make any sense to not have a description...unless there is a way outside the card to figure out what it does.

 

The card is useless unless you know what it does.

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Pics are kinda cool.

 

Most of them are overused...not so cool due to this.

Read Dj Osiris's thread of OCG.

 

which images are over-used though?

 

Drakuma and Shima's for starters. They are very overused.

 

hmm, I see. Ah well...

 

I had a different pic in mind for Drakuma but liked that one better. It really doesn't matter much, I just want my cards to be as realistic as possible so I don't have any unfair advantages.

 

Every card I make, is just going to be used to play against my gf...or any friends I get into creating their own cards.

 

If I had actual skill with Photoshop or something I have some pretty good ideas for my own original pics, sadly...I have no visual artistic talent...i'm a writer not a concept artist.

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Have you ever played Yu-Gi-Oh before?

 

I have tried' date=' I watched the entire series and unless memory fails me a friend let me use his deck to duel one of his other decks...and I have played a few of the games.

[/quote']

 

Uhm... not quite sure why your here then but, to each his own.

effect monster, spell, and tap cards dont have descriptions before their effect. They just have an effect.

 

Oh I know that, like Man-eater bug...when he's flipped he destroys one monster, but it doesn't say that on the card.

 

as for spells and Traps...my personal opinion is that doesn't make any sense to not have a description...unless there is a way outside the card to figure out what it does.

 

The card is useless unless you know what it does.

 

He means how you said: The powerful blast or what ever about energy blast. Just put what it does not what it is.

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