My first fan-fic - Alans revenge

[oskar10]

Chapter 1 : New duelists

 

Headmaster: Hi Every new duelists. I am you new headmaster we will start with some testing duels. They best of you been Slifers. They second be Obelisk. They badest will be Ra.

Jaden: I hope we get some good duelists Syros

Alan: I hope I be Slifer.

Nigel: Me too.

Headmaster: we can have 5 duels in progres. The first duel is Jenny vs Johnny. The second Thomas vs Sonic...... And last Alan vs Nathan

Alan: Yes

Nigel: Good luck

Nathan: Hi loser.

Alan: Close you ash. Alan hate Nathan because he always teasing. Nathan: Are you prepared to be humilatet ok you problem.

 

Nathan/Alan: lets duel

 

Nathan: i start.

 

(Nathan draw a card and summon it.)

Nathan: I summon Infernal Man in attack mode.

 

Infernal Man/level 4/FIRE/Warrior/effect monster/1500 ATK/1200 DEF.

 

Nathan: I end my turn.

 

Alan: Ok i draw

(Alan draw a card)

 

Alan: I summon Mage Apprentices in attack position. I use Mage Apprentices effect and tribute it to summon: Mage Of War - Santai

 

 

Alan: And now Santai attack his Infernal Man. And at the last i place a card face-down.

 

(Santai make a fireball and kill Infernal Man)

Alan LP 4000

Nathan LP 2600

 

Nathan: Haha you go in my trap. When Infernal Man be destroyed in attack mode i can summon A lv. 7 or higher Fire monster from my hand. Go Fire Golem in attack position.

(Fire Golem/level 8/FIRE/Rock/3000 ATK/2500 DEF)

 

Nathan: Fire Golem attack Mage Of War - Santai.

 

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[Spire]

Ok, since this is your first, i'll go easy. Too short. We have no idea whats going on or who the characters are. Add a character list, including decks and bios. Extend the chapters and go in to more detail. Describe to place and characters and all that. Hope it helped.

[oskar10]

Character List

 

Alan: The boy There is the headrole in the fan-fic.

Alans deck is a Mage Of War deck. The best cards is his 2 Synchro monsters Lord Of Mages Of War/level 9/LIGHT/Spellcaster/Effect monster/3200 ATK/2000 DEF and Master Of The Mages Of War/level 10/LIGHT/Spellcaster/Effect monster/3500 ATK/3000 DEF. His deck has a lot of cards there let him special summon the Mages Of War with cirka 2000-3000 in ATK. Here can you see the pic. of Mage Apprentices

 

Nathan: Alans Rival number 1. Nathan Teasing often Alan because Alan is better to dueling. His deck is buildet op with FIRE monsters, and the best monster is Fire Golem[Look in the story and find it]

 

Nigel: Alans best friend from school. Dueling but isnt so good. Nathan also

teasing Nigel because Nigel is a little fat.

 

Jaden: I think you know him :-)

 

Syrus: I also think you know him.

 

Also thanks to Future Imperor for his idea with a character/decklist

[oskar10]

Chapter 2: Alan vs Nathan

 

Alan: Activate trap card Negate Attack.

(Alan draw a card and smile:-))

Alan: I summon Spelltuner. And so i can summon my Synchro monster Lord Of Mages Of War.

(Lord Of Mages Of War smashed Fire Golem to atoms)

 

 

Alan: And so i must draw a card.

(Alan draw a card)

Alan. Lord attack Fire Golem. You turn

 

Nathan: Noooooo it was my best monster (but not my best trap card haha)

 

Nathan LP 2400

Alan LP 4000

 

Nathan: Ok

(Nathan draw a card)

 

Nathan: I summon a monster in face-down defense mode and a face-down card. You turn

 

(Alan draw a card)

Alan: I use Mystical Space Typhoon on you face-down card.

 

Nathan: Noooooooooooooooooooo.

 

Alan: And now Happy Wings. I summon Mage Of War - Dantai. Lord attack his face down-card.

 

 

Nathan flipped up Small Fire Dragon/level 2/FIRE/dragon/600 ATK/700 DEF.

 

Alan: And Dantai attack direct.

(Dantai slashed Nathan with his sword)

 

Alan: I won man i won

 

Nigel. Good game Alan

 

Alan: Thank you.

 

Nathan LP 0

Alan LP 4000

 

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