God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 [align=center]Thunder Warrior Nostril: When this card is Advanced Summoned successfully, destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field. Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard to return one face-down Monster Card on your opponent's side of the field to its owner's hand. If this card is removed from play it is treated as if as it was in the Graveyard. This is a card i made in little time. The effect is original i think and i made it quite balanced. The image is mine, i just got the render from planetrenders.net and that's all. I hope you guys like it and i have many comments[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woodmouse Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Wooow... Cool... 9/10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Thanks woody Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 I'll make a quick OCG suggestion ;) "This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card is Advanced Summoned, destroy 1 Spell or Trap your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to return 1 face-down monster your opponent controls to its owner's hand. If this card is removed from play, it is treated as being in the Graveyard." About the card, I like it. Standard 2400 ATK for 6 stars, but I'll risk saying it's underpowered. Why? Mobius lets you destroy 2 S/Ts upon Tribute Summoning, and he isn't run anymore, because most of the time the opponent will just chain the S/Ts to Mobius's effect, effectively cutting down on his usefulness. This card only allows you to blow 1 card up, and unless it's Mirror Force, nothing stops your opponent from chaining and losing nothing at all. The second part of the effect is interesting, wouldn't change a thing, but it still doesn't justify why it cannot be Special Summoned. About the last part, if you're trying to prevent its Special Summoning via Different Dimension Reincarnation, it's easier if you reword the first part of the effect to "This card cannot be Special Summoned while it is removed from play or in the Graveyard.", because I don't really see any other use for that last line... Again, I don't think the Summoning restriction is necessary because this card isn't gamebreaking when it's out. All in all, I like the card a lot, albeit being, in my opinion, slightly underpowered. Great job as always. ;) (isn't a nostril a part of the nose? :P) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Make it lvl 7. Other than that, good card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Wow. Nice pic. Great OCG. The end effect was very origanal. Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 I'll make a quick OCG suggestion ;) "This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. When this card is Advanced Summoned' date=' destroy 1 Spell or Trap your opponent controls. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to return 1 face-down monster your opponent controls to its owner's hand. If this card is removed from play, it is treated as being in the Graveyard." About the card, I like it. Standard 2400 ATK for 6 stars, but I'll risk saying it's underpowered. Why? Mobius lets you destroy 2 S/Ts upon Tribute Summoning, and he isn't run anymore, because most of the time the opponent will just chain the S/Ts to Mobius's effect, effectively cutting down on his usefulness. This card only allows you to blow 1 card up, and unless it's Mirror Force, nothing stops your opponent from chaining and losing nothing at all. The second part of the effect is interesting, wouldn't change a thing, but it still doesn't justify why it cannot be Special Summoned. About the last part, if you're trying to prevent its Special Summoning via Different Dimension Reincarnation, it's easier if you reword the first part of the effect to "This card cannot be Special Summoned while it is removed from play or in the Graveyard.", because I don't really see any other use for that last line... Again, I don't think the Summoning restriction is necessary because this card isn't gamebreaking when it's out. All in all, I like the card a lot, albeit being, in my opinion, slightly underpowered. Great job as always. ;) (isn't a nostril a part of the nose? :P)[/quote'] Nostril? I took the word michael and translated it in latin and that is what came out. About the effect, i was aware of it being overpowered. So, i dunno. i will wait for some other comments and then i will probably change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast user J Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 DeMeNTeD: Make it lvl 7. Other than that, good card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 If only you read what Blackwind wrote you wouldn't quote him. As he said, making it LV 7 would underpower it more so no Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast user J Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 God GAK: If only you read what Blackwind wrote you wouldn't quote him. As he said, making it LV 7 would underpower it more so no Oh, sorry.:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 I wouldn't really change the effect, not all cards have to be strong enough for competitive play, and anyway, the only thing making it underpowered is the summoning restriction, other than that, it's would be perfectly acceptable card if it existed in real life; it wouldn't be a big staple, but it'd have its uses, I think. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 OK, and LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL at your sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Yeah, I love it to bits too. :PI think I'll keep this one permanently and drop the sig randomizer function for good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 worst name ever and not that good an effect =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Excuse me? I didn't get this. Tell me something better that you have thought of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 do u know what a nostril is? also the effect gains no advantage, the only way to special summon him would be through ddr then its just an mst with legs basically the pics awesome the effect isnt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Good Card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted July 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 No what is nostril? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 I already told you in my first post. A nostril is a part of the nose, google it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Legend Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 GAK - Ignore Tonisanoob he is a complete waste. On the other hand, the card is quite nice, I am fond of it ^_^ 9.3/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOREAN Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 wow good card but NOSTRIL are you serious look up nostril in the dictionary but i like the card i give you a 9.9/10 i'd give you a 10 but NOSTRIL ?????!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 good card GAK. It looks like a little OP monarch though. >_> The nose monarch.. lol.. Though maybe a little OP, its good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 GAK - Ignore Tonisanoob he is a complete waste. On the other hand' date=' the card is quite nice, I am fond of it ^_^ 9.3/10 ^_^[/quote'] urrm no lets think this card, OOOOR a monarch i would say a monarch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 wow good card but NOSTRIL are you serious look up nostril in the dictionary but i like the card i give you a 9.9/10 i'd give you a 10 but NOSTRIL ?????!!!!!! wow good post but KOREAN are you serious look up korean in the dictionary it will say "ignorant fool who thinks he can talk in a noobish way towards someone who haves thrice the stars he has" but i like the post i give you a 9.9/10 i'd give you a 10 but KOREAN ?????!!!!!! ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altair117 Posted July 2, 2008 Report Share Posted July 2, 2008 Badass looking card dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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