acdcfan1276 Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Lets try this again!!!I don't own any of these images i got them off of photobucket.Please help with any problems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bankz Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 some OCG errors but they are good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 The pics aren't good...they are too plain. The effects are also grammatically incorrect. Read more on OCG.2/10 on the attempt though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Young Mage - REALLY overpowering. Try giving it a more reasonable effect.Black Knight - Basic Ritual Monster.Dark Chivalry Ritual - OCG needs improving. Nice image, thoughDemon Guitar - Good card effect. Did you draw the image for the picture?Holy Knight - Nice image. Be careful concerning religion on the boards.Nightmare Dragon - Misspelled "Nightmare"; Small OCG errorSelf-Writing Pen - It's like a more sadistic version of "Fairy Box"; Nice image I give an overall rating of 6/10. You have good ideas. You just need to improve your OCG a little. Keep up the good work, dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yasu Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 a few OGC errors but they are good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSorrow Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Last card image is cool, need work on the effect though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 I really like self writing pen, its a win-win situation. There is no risk for those 1000 life points. I would lower it though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Life Pointsopponent'sATK points Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Some pics need backgrounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 I Agree With Demented. They Do Need Backgrounds As Well As OCG Corrections. Plus, You Spelled Nightmare Wrong.Lol. Very Nice for First Cards. 4/10+ 1 For Effort. Total= 5/10 Average. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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