RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 The wording isn't the best. Please give criticism and rateEffect:If this card is sent to the Graveyard due to the effect of "Sacrifice For The Demon" this card is automatically Special Summoned on your side of the field in face-up Defense position. This effect can only be used 3 times during a duel. This card is based of the idea of sacrificing a weak person to please some sort of deity. I like the overall idea at least.xD I think I might change the name to "Demonic Sacrifice" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiken Kisuki Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 cool dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bankz Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 the pics great and the effect is realistic I think ill give you a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 AWESOME. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bankz Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 your really good at making cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Aww, thanks!I try my hardest to be the best.TO BE THE BEST THE VERRY BEST.THE BEST THERE EVER WAS.TO CATCH THEM IS MY REAL TEST.TO TRAIN THEM IS MY CAAAUUUSEEE!Lolz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Good card. The OCG is a little off. It could be worded like this: "Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower monster on your side of the field. If you use this card's effect, your opponent can only attack with one monster during their next Battle Phase." This card reminds me of "The Dark Door" from Labyrinth of Nightmare. The only differences are that yours requires a cost and it only affects your opponent. AWESOME PICTURE!!! This card gets a 9/10. You're on fire....just like that guy in the picture is going to be in a minute :D Now for "The Sacrificed"... From what I saw, it looks like the monster will never have to worry about the last effect because all the counters will be removed when the monster leaves the field. Good picture and great idea. This one gets a 7/10. Pretty good. Not too much needs to be done to this card - mostly OCG stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiken Kisuki Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Good card. The OCG is a little off. It could be worded like this: "Once per turn' date=' you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower monster on your side of the field. If you use this card's effect, your opponent can only attack with one monster during their next Battle Phase." This card reminds me of "The Dark Door" from Labyrinth of Nightmare. The only differences are that yours requires a cost and it only affects your opponent. AWESOME PICTURE!!! This card gets a 9/10. You're on fire....just like that guy in the picture is going to be in a minute :D[/quote'] Haahaa. I would not want to be him. The onlything wrong with your wording is loopoles. It says one monster. A monster can attack twice in a battle phase. So I made it attack once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raiken Kisuki Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Oh, I misunderstood what you meant by only being able to attack once. Please clarify. Are you trying to say: A) That only ONE monster can attack during their Battle Phase?B) That only ONE monster can attack during thier Battle Phase - and it can only attack once?C) ALL their monsters can attack, but can only attack one time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 B.Yeah, B.Once with one monster. One attack total. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Please Raiken Kisuki, only post if you have something helpful to say, so I can improve.In my opinion you are technically spamming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 itsface-up 1 not one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 I wasn't sure about face-up. And ill change one to 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 I wasn't sure about face-up. And ill change one to 1. mmkgood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Thanks.But what do you think of the effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Thanks.But what do you think of the effects? well they aren't spectacular but there good =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 wait.. now how will the first card get 3 counters?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 wait.. now how will the first card get 3 counters?? When it is sent to the graveyard by the spells effect, it is special summoned to the field. it gets one counter. Say its used the next turn, it is sent to the grave, special summoned and gets a counter. then again and it gets a third counter. Now when it goes to the graveyard its removed form play.So it cant be reused 892384093274829347 times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KOREAN Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 WOW you might be a jerk but when it comes to making cards you deliver one good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Deamonic Sacrifice would sound much better. Note that "This effect can be only used thrice in a Duel" is perfectly legal OCG. So, you can scrap the counter idea if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted July 3, 2008 Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 yeah, but when it is removed from the field all counters are removed. this would keep happening, unless you stated that these counters stay on the card while in the graveyard, or say that it is SSed with one more counter than before.... then it could get to three counters. ^_^ but as of now, it wouldnt get there.... 8/10 from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RobbieG1o11 Posted July 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2008 Deamonic Sacrifice would sound much better. Note that "This effect can be only used thrice in a Duel" is perfectly legal OCG. So' date=' you can scrap the counter idea if you want.[/quote'] Okay. But do I have to use thrice?It sounds so fussy.xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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